I was searching for cultivation novels, and stumbled upon this story. Seeing it was written by someone who had already written two great novels I gave it a chance( after reading the tags). Within the other story’s there a background given at the start, Meant to help readers understand the back story. The same was done here i just their wasn’t an in-depth explanation.(although I hope the author will go in depth at a later point in time) Moving onto character design I feel that for someone who is supposed to have “lived” for billions of years, he would know how the world of this story works and be a less trusting person I understand the slave girl but he keeps helping people randomly through the story. There are other times when he shows a personality befitting of his age like when he try’s to scam the guild, but at other times he shows a nieave personality like helping characters who are not really needed to progress the story. Although I feel the author will eventually put him in situations where these characters will be useful, their is currently no use to them other than saying his resources which could be used to further his character as a whole.
Its seems to be a cross between pubg battle royale and a power fantasy max power system story! I throughly enjoyed it and hope the webnovel team picks it for continued tramslation!
It's Good.You're not gonna drop this right?Like every other novel you wrote...........................................I dunno how to write reviews
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This one give me fresh vibe to Gaming genre. Written beautifully with interesting plot and lot mysteries
Yeah, but anyway!
I need more Hiro x Liberty, she is just soo Cute!
don't be fooled by the general title this story is really good.
I'm just going to say that for the moment the author has managed not to dwell too much on the MC's time (we don't have 10,000 chapters in a day).
There are a few spelling mistakes (but seeing as this is a story written by an amateur I don't ask too much).
Lin name MC I am in
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This novel has the potential to be really nice and the system is also okayish. The system's way of making the MC grow is seen as pointing towards a harem route, but it could also make the story go towards the MC making others fall for him while he stays loyal to his girlfriend. It would be difficult to do this, but I'd like to have some hope that the Author did this well. I hope this does get more chapters translated soon.
Personally Like everything about it, however I can only hope at this point that this book gets picked up to be translated further since I believe there are already a decent amount of chapters already written, just not translated up to good quality. Can only hope, despite it being months already.
Holy, awesome intro. The starting has me captivated. Really interested to see how this novel turns out to be. Looking forward to future publishes!
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The story started pretty mysterious making me curious what will happen then I was dropped with a huge bomb of more confusion which I can't wait to see where will lead.
So far, while being some mistakes here and there, I pretty much like it so I recommend everyone to give at least at try.
You won't regret it.