I have read up to the end of book 1 and will be dropping this book. The author and the world have great potential but there were two things that killed it for me personally.The first was that the details of this novel just seem subtly wrong. A good example of what I mean is the response to a comet coming near earth. This happens semi-regularly in the real world and the various responses people have to it (from cults proclaiming the end of days to nothing at all) are fairly well known. In this world though, every world leader gives an IDENTICAL speech at exactly the same time to reassure all citizens of their countries. Everyone in the world stops working and hides in their house with emergency food for days before the comet comes. After the comet flies by the planet, there is worldwide rioting for days. This is insane. Why??? There are a lot of oddities like this in the novel that stand out and were regularly breaking my immersion in the story.The other issue is the tone. This book is about teenagers in high school (one of whom has super powers). Great. But our super hero straight up permanently disables his fellow students because he doesn't like them. His principal murders a man for threatening a student (even when the man has no way to carry out such a threat). The good guys in this novel are violent and dark. That is the GOOD guys. In a novel about teenage super heroes. It reminds me of books like the meta world chronicles over at royal road and that is not a good thing. It feels like if I was reading the first Harry Potter book and Harry was permanently cursing kids in Slitherin because of fights at school and Dumbledore murdered Harry's muggle family for being pricks. It isn't that this is impossible just a really jarring tone in that kind of book.That said I really liked the original take on reincarnating. Selling music, videogames, Youtube channels, etc. were all great ideas. The cultivation system was well done. The characters were fairly well developed and change over time which is great. The writing is excellent with few to no noticeable grammatical or spelling issues. I definitely think the author is talented and is doing a great job for a first novel.
This story about a MC who copy all the famous story (most of them Chinese) and movie..It's fun and fresh.Also unique...give it a try.
One hell of a novel ? ? I can't wait for the updates that if it was chosen.... Plz don't drop this beauty ? rev#shameless review of a hungry fan
Amazing this novel really has a lot of potential just dont drop this and just update normally also i hope you make this novel about 300-500 chapterPs:We LOVE Loong chapter
idk what to write but so far it's very good and I love it ?????❤?????❤?????❤?????❤?????❤?????❤????❤?a 90.
MC is too passive. He no life’ a game for 10 years then when the game world merged with the real world, he became the strongest in the world. Only he went back to the menial joke he worked instead of planning for the day when raid bosses starts to appear. Meanwhile, the world is falling apart because the law can’t be enforced on evil immortals and the appearance of raid bosses that are on his level. All the problems he faces are due to his own inaction early on, only to end up having to solve it later.
The problem is that I am not truly engaged in reading this. No reason on why he returned back in time. A complete waste of time. And there are other stories that execute the idea even better and with greater enthusiasm. Removed from my library.
I stopped reading very recently and I will tell you whyThe story has no purposeNow hold on a minute. Stay with me.Originally the Mc gets sent back in time after a fight with the man who stole his soon to be wife.This creates motivation for the Mc to make money to become rich in order to have the qualifications to marry this girl so much.But what's that 2 busty chicks with 0 character development come around and BAM the Mc has second thoughts about the girl he was in love with.So what comes next... what's the new motivation. What does the Mc strive for. The thing is it's NOTHING. There is no conflict and the Mc is now stupidly overpowered that if their was any conflict even oh I don't know 40,000 players trying to kill you they still wouldn't be able to do it. Now some people say that the last point might be bs because he has the 200,000 back up NPCs and the forbidden scroll but you need to remember that nobody was able to do pretty much anything in smh to him at all coupled with his-S class inheritance allowing him to wield a 2 handed weapon -his battle companion who is hinted at being the GODDESS OF WAR's SISTER [who could easily distory a lvl 150 ETHERAL FEILD BOSS dragon]-his life saving skills such as making himself go into another dimension -oh and not to mention if that all fails he can just teleport his party in who will have 2 more S class inheritance -on this the Mc says that it was rare for a REIGION to have one of these in his past life yet now on his team his 2 herem girls whos personalities are at best considered stereotypes-don't forget one of his other party members will now get himself a dragon -coupled with the fact that he can summon a pet meaning he to will probably get a dragon cause why not-he is a tank with the strength of a DPS class. This might not seem like much but it makes the Mc so stupidly overpowered the fact that no one can kill him. - he can do dmg to people almost 1 shoting them while they are powerless to do a damn thing to stop him even professionals , just look I the recent chapters of the teams from India and Europe, powerless, NOTHING they can doSo what's his motivation. What's his goal now. He is the most overpowered person in the game. And frankly NOTHING goes wrong and he winds up getting everything he needs automatically -example the first main story quest -the unicorn horn -the black dragon heart - why? Cause why notThere really is no point in reading it unless your looking forward to the chapters where there is a world war but with his guild having 3 S class inheritance when just 1 can turn the tide in a battle there really is no point in reading the bookIf you feel as though I mis-categorized something please point it out so I can clarify. I will not insult you as everyone has their own opinions End of my rant Have a nice day
I have already read this on GT, and what I hate on this novel is that there is too many characters and I can't really remember them all and I get really confused.
First of all, I would like to say that, please keep up with the novel till the first 300 chapters. The novel was mediocre for 300 chapters. So don't get put off and keep reading. The novel picks up pace, writing is vastly improved and story starts to develop afterwards.I've been reading the novel for the past four years and trust me, it's a gem. The character development, world building, storyline are simply superb. It would compel you think what might come afterwards and would literally fry yoir brains out. All your theories and predictions may do down to drainage. Author surprises so much that you theorize multiple possibilities and all could be wrong. The novel just gets better and better, the more you read. There is no repetition and arrogant young master, unlike other Xinxia novels. Foreshadowing is superb and the most important is the MC. The MC's story is centre of the plot. Author connects the dots superbly, also makes sure that the mystery continues. Harem, tbh is mediocre. So don't expect too much of the harem. The author has a good grasp of concepts and expands it beautifully. There is samsara, Karma, true and false, life and death which you might find in other novels. But Ink just takes it to a whole new level. First 300 chapter, mediocre300-700, good700-1150 great1150- simply awesome. I'm currently at chapter 1260 and caught up with the raws.Human translation puts me off a bit and was slow. But now that webnovel has picked it up, let's see. Also beware, if you go for MTL after you have caught up with the human translation, there are many terms that may differ. Even excluding all that, it deserves a five star, atleast for me.
don't read this, there are 20000 novels like this one in the webnovel that have the same story and have more chapters so why waste time reading this one? PICK ANOTHER PLEASE
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