Don't wanna review. It good. Read novel.
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Machine Translation, the grammar is awful.
there is almost no use of "is" and is almost always "was" or "had".
Past tense is all messed up.
He, she also cannot be trusted because a machine cannot determine he or she through chinese and context
It is an otherwise good story
Take my words as a passing wind for I have only skimmed through your work.
Separate your paragraphs such that they contain 2 to 4 sentences depending on length, otherwise it would be too taxing to read.
Apologies for not reading the entire story.
Write well and don't hesitate to ask for help from other authors in the official discord server of inkstone.
You can be a better writer.
I cannot express it. Wonderful, amazing,thrilling,fun and magic all over. I want to read the upcoming chapters. [img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]
I will have to hide my talent and not tell anyone about my progress, and the next day he immediately tells his friend.trash........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Such a good read. Can't wait for the next chapter of the book. I am sure the next chapter is going to great. The author has a way with words, which I really like.
decent!! this novel need a editor, if you read it as is then its like reading from google translate. Which so annoying and make your eyes suffer...
Great pace and character building. It is a cliche story, but written well. It has a typical start: retunrning to past after being dumped,but in this story it represents the previous life of the mc and building his character.
So 10/10
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Just starting this off...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................