Here we are back at Sarthak's novel.So... The latest few chapters have not been my cup of tea. By that, I mean that the whole "Lucifer" thing. Nonetheless, the next few chapters are a tad interesting.They expanded more on the lore and had development. Sarthak clearly likes his world building. Morgan's getting weirder, but at least Glen's there. I suggest the author add some moments of introspection. The more he writes, the somewhat better his skills become. That's all I'm gonna say for now.
A very interesting read. Though the genre and style seems common the author strongly emphasizes story and character development. The author strikes a great balance between the otherworld life and the "real" life in the novel which is the key to writing in the dual life genre.The setting and world building need a little work because theyre too generic and very little is written about them. Just a city and a village. Needs time, culture, and technological settings at least. Magic is there but to what extent? Theres too many basic questions left unanswered for 200 chapters.The MC is written well as a person and has so far (200chapters) developed well in character. His persona as a struggling person is deeply rooted and not awkward or forced which is reflected well in his speech to choices and distrust of people. +points for well written desperation and seething anger.Though he is given OP skills his actions are not really too absurd and does not take the reader out of immersion. The author does fall into the summoner having too much summons that they become forgettable trap, it seems like the author is holding himself back for now.Side characters are written very well. The sister gives life to the MC and showcases his more familial and caring side. She herself highlights both their backgrounds and motivations. A well written character that provides impetus for the MC to improve himselve and strive for something more.The first opponent provided a satisfying and believeable character arc. A cliche that was believeable and satisying even if a cliche.The main antagonists are capable, smart, uncaring, self-righteous, and provide a satisfying foil to the MC. The hero can only be as good as the villains he defeats and the villains make you love to hate them.Though the story, setting, and some elements are predictable, the style and characters make this story fresh and an easy good read.
I’d like to invite you all to join me on this brand-new journey. I won’t tell you how good this story is—that’s for you to decide once you dive in.So, go ahead and turn the pages. You might just find your next reading obsession waiting for you.
Amazing .
Fantastic story, development quite good, and the English is flawless.
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This is a really good novel, i recommend this to everyone?
So far good. But the fl gave me this in a rush vibe and doesn’t think things through. Like the first 3 chapters she already got punch in the face by her ex boyfriend/mate ?u200d?and ml I’m confused about him for now. Might be because there only four chapters for now ?but still encourage to read. Makes you want to know how it would develop ?
i really enjoyed it I hope you continue but is there a discord link?
What can I say this novel is way to good and fun I am love it keep up the good work author kun