Title: 修仙从沙漠开始Author：中天紫薇大帝Status: completed (838 chapters +7 extras).....................................................................
saw this on the list of winners from wpc and decided to check it outpretty generic weak to strong plot setup but has interesting charactersa lot is covered up and the author really likes to keep mysteriesoverall not bad, looks like things are getting exciting, pls post more
Definitely a diamond hidden in the rough. Other than a couple spelling based errors near the start of the story this novel is really quite underrated. Hard working and relatable MC who develops as a character at reasonable pace. The author gives real reasons for how the MC can become OP without it being over the top. Sorry to see the story on hiatus, I think it has real potential. Thanks for writing it!
Although I can't say much about it because only the first 7 chapters have been released so far and not much about the book can be reviewed so far, my rating is a clear 5 star.The book gives me a feeling that makes me want to continue to read. This is guaranteed 100% better than 99% of the other reincarnated as a dragon or something similar, if you like something similar to that. I recommend it to you, and rightfully claim my spot as third reviewer XD
100 chapters Sigh* This as far i can go. I enjoyed this novel mainly bec of the wholesome parts ?. But the mc is nothing special he is mainly used as a boy toy and most of the time helping his girls sort out ther problems all in name of love??u200d♂️There was a little bit of character development but at the same time it wasnt enough for that many chapters he just didnt change that much.. It does get frustrasting reading about how the mc has nothing going on for him as you read on.Yes Unfortunatly the MC is all talk half of the time mainly when it about to his life. Granted he had his moments but he does not make reasonable goals and it feels like he has barely no ambitions to improve his Situation. Basically he does not take any practical steps so far. Tbf He does often go to the library? But finds Little answers that will help with explaining his power. Tho it just ends up his girlfreinds find all answers for him. To me the MC is just useless id rather read a novel about his girlfriend lol. At the end of the day he does not have his prioritys right as he is all over the place with his emotions.But hey this just i what think✌️Good luck
Not bad actually. Your story have unlimited potential especially set in a sandblock game like Minecraft. Character development is quite slow but smooth, suggest add in modpacks especially RL craft to make your story make more "sense". I can see your pattern of the story and plot, super excited for the next series.
book is trash just a lot of filler and repetition to extend the number of chapters. not worth it. I was at chapter 100 about 20 short chapters dealing with one situation at snail pace.
Honestly, at first I thought this was a good novel. But after reading a few pages I realized that this novel was too classic, and the plot was predictable. I'm slowly getting bored. When I was in my tens I didn't really want to read any more, this oath was really bad.
Embarrassing as a proud system holder, he gives his only cheat to a girl he doesn't even know. Now she can become a cheat existence in his stead. Because he is too braindead to survive for more than 5 years in the simulator himself. When he could simply wait for good talents to show up... Pathetic really.
Translation? Mediocre. Story? Mediocre. Anyway I don't know if it's intentional but the Qian Dynasty in this webnovel here seems to be a terrible place to live in and I don't like how the Mc is just content to live in that. In the end I do not recommend reading further. Only good point is that the Mc doesn't have a westernized name. I am becoming way too bitter for this.
5star just for the name "Zhou Yi "
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please try this book it is good
author great job but it's hit me hard I am still crying I really like your storybut I feel so sad