this novels is okay, interesting world setting but mediocre story, protagonist is bland, plot story kinda forced, inconsistency characters is exist here, romance is bad, but cultivation is good.
definitely not good for avid reader who read tons of novels.
great novels for ppl who just started reading into east fantasy novels.
good for ppl who seek cultivation novels.
this is good novels but there is tons of better novels out there if u dont mind reading novels other than chinese.
i believe coiling dragon is better than this novel, although the characters in cd so similar in this novel, actually every characters in iet novels very similar, well characters making is not iet forte.
if you guys seek for overpowering cultivation novels then read iet novels, if you seek great story search elsewhere
MC is actually playing Osu!
nothing to see here guys... move along.
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story progression is too slow.
system takes too much space.
and other things etc..
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I’ve already read the entirety of this series, but it was a poor translation. EVEN SO, I FREAKING LOVE THIS SERIES!! OMG! I mean yeah it’s somewhat easy to predict the base plot line, but let me tell you. That doesn’t take away from it at all. The only reason that I’m not a 5/5 is because I don’t know the sites update rate.
Really like how this is written. The MC is not dumb as others have stated but actually really brilliant. looking forward to reading more.
Overall great but with a few flaws
writing quality-
Again, I am a speed reader and i rarely spot grammar or spelling issues. But from what I've seen (and remember) it is pretty damn good.
Stability-
For someone writing about another successful fanfic the update rate is fantastic. Though i wish bleached multiverse comes back...
story development-
Good but somehow feels rushed. He went from greenhorn graduate to superhuman real quick. Don't make me mention the romance. Sure you are going to remedy it by making fillers but still.
Character design-
Well while the MC can be like a jack in the box. His main personality is his determination and drive. He has experienced getting a friend taken by him cause he was powerless. The feeling of being a 'commodity' so this drives him to become stronger. The scientist past life only makes it stronger.
But Yan Mei is kinda shallow Crybaby tsundere when first introduced. Naive thinker (the one with children begging) aside from that her personality isn't set in stone.
Hina on the other hand her recent story with the nobles feels like it is her way of coping to be joking and all. But it doesn't explain why when that one guy touched her she literally sliced the guy's hand off. I know she's only been in for a few chaps so I'm gonna cut you some slack. Her reason for being in love with MC is clear too it must've felt like herself back then wanting to become stronger but her maybe for revenge but MC to protect himself and his family (pure speculation)
World Background-
Pretty damn good. I ain't gonna lie but i rarely fully read world building chapters or just skim through it. So I'm not a good judge.
Btw. I feel like you are an author that sneakily establishes the OPness not just bestows it all at once.
A very nice story.
I like the pace of the story. you really got me hooked into his journey of cultivation. I would suggest you to work on your Grammer part more though.
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Great story! unique MC! it's really a good story wih potential of 2-3k chapters at least it's interesting and funny op mc who is a perv from born xD I really hope the author won't give up on this or it would be too disappointing >.<
Nickaido's here, with a brand new novel, and naturally, I'm going to shamelessly put five stars. Hope in and I'm sure you'll enjoy the ride. Love you all.
The book is great, although it's my first time reading a book that has to do with history,I mustn't deny how well it is written
Perfect story! The writing style, the flow, etc. Everything is perfect. Keep bleeding author!