Terrible writing. Utterly pukeworthy. The MC is proclaimed a genius by the writer of this train wreck but is completely unable to make sound decisions in situations where he has full information.
Though i have never tried BL before, I loved your writing style.Plot is interesting.Specially in first chapter.Those descriptions are deep.And with good amount of humour, I can see great success for this novel.But honestly I don't know if BL genera could go up on webnovel.
MTL..
I really like the novel it has a different out look in cultivation world and is not guy reincarnated in another body that was trash but now he will be a genius he is a genius the moment he becomes a cultivator not in the mind tho just a genius in cultivation.
This novel will be my number two. My number one is my Vampire God novel. Please feel free to comment any requests in my chapters. I'll reply to any comments as I see them. Love ya guys,Ellendria
Hello, lil kitty~! I rarely read and leave reviews because I too focused on my writing so much however, this day is different because I want to read what my friends are writing. Here goes~!First 2 chapters are up, and it is already interesting! Knowing that you are writing at a young age, this is already good~! I like your choice of words! The atmosphere of the setting is light hearted as it is fun! I know that this story will soon have a twist, ya know? I am going to expect more from you, lil kitty~! You made me smile! Keep up the good work! I can really see potential~!
I really love how this book starts with explaining where the character is at in his life and gives a good entrance into the story. Another thing I like about it is even though he went back to his younger self his injury didn't magically disappear just because of the system. But overall its a great story and I'm excited for the chapters to come and hope it continues being great.
STOP looking for another novel! this is it, the high tier piece of work that is so rare to find nowadays. the author is defintely not an amateur but a seasoned professional. you will not rest until you are done reading all 350 chapters. and you will want MORE. so many twists and character deepness is hard to come by. just try it
I will give it three stars as it was interesting, but as it was in the beginning, I still don't know if I have to review with 5 stars or with 1 star lower.By the way, this is my criteria for judging:1 star: Boring, way too clichè.2 star: Way too generoc but has a good way to make the story flow.3 star: Interesting4 star: Very interesting with unique features, can bee recomendeed for people who wanted to give reading a try.5 stars: Interesting, may be generic but has a great story flow, character development, basically a book that can be recommended as a must read.
Pretty interesting story. Good world building and fairly consistent characters. Minor loopholes and plot holes but iverall not too bad.Translation quality takes a steep nosedive after chapter 60. Goes from good translation to barely edited mtl.
TELL ME WHY Ain't nothin' but a heartacheTELL ME WHY Ain't nothin' but a mistakeTELL ME WHY I never want to hear you say GT is coming this wayPlease someone explain to me why gravitytale translations are moving over
Well first of all i am really glad to come across this book....the author ingeniously incorporated the indian myths into a martial arts and cultivation novel....that is so brilliant....the story development is good so far even it's a bit fast forward and some of the details remain a bit unclear....and the characters are good so far....the environment of the story is also very interesting.....but there are some grammatical errors and also the name of some of the characters keep changing....but overall the story is good so far n m enjoying this utterly....so keep up the good work n make this story more n more interesting