this is a pretty well written story, the cheats, the world background, characters and all but sadly the MC is too much of a goody two-shoes busybody who could get OP fast but instead has to be all Mr righteous. as at chapter 700, there are multiple chicks that want the MC but he's like i can't protect them so not yet and yet he has a secret realm all to himself. it's a really nice story though but i don't like the righteousness. I mean, prior to his 'reincarnation' he was a contracted killer who supposedly killed for good. he's understandably overprotective but his righteousness is too much for me. Other than our conflicting ideologies, everyone should read this
Looks great, hope it gets picked....
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Review time! 19 chapters.
Well, the sypnosis explained what is going on. MC's girlfriend is a reincarnator from 6 years in the future.
The world is going to be struck by a disaster when an ancient civilisation will be awakened and humanity will fight against it. Magic and all.
Though in the first 19 chapters it will be the meeting of the mc and his girlfriend. Note: the girlfriend is very creepy and does not know how to court somebody. But at the end of the day the mc finally accepted that she's a reincarnator and became her boyfriend.
When he accepts it he gains a system. A boyfriend model system. People with romantic interest and high favorability for the mc will give our mc a part of their abilities/stats. (This is a red flag for harem)
Btw, mc's girlfriend is overpowered.
Translation Quality: 5* (as always)
SoU: 5* (as always)
Story development: 3* (It's okay)
Character design: 3* (No comment)
World background: 3* (Just a modern world and future explained, nothing special)
Overall score: 3.8
Personal score: 3.5 (till chapter 19)
Literally kumo desuga nanika or im a spider so what copy with bad translation and if it was chinese instead of japanese .
Hmm, I will add it to my library, and check it out when more chapters.
i really loved but it needed more detalils like how did they engineered the brotherds and agave them powers how did they reseted maverick, and if maverick has nany friends and give some more eneral context plus they were too much grammar errors
Yes
This is unreadable it looks like he had a stroke while writing this. it's even worse than MTL somehow.
it has a rich background and the writing is good and the characters have a unique twist to each of them
there are way too few reviews even after all this time? idk something seems a little bit sus in here ?. so i will leave this to see if it'll get deleted or not in the future. also the story is good just give it a try.
The story seems fine. However, despite my vast experience reading poorly translated/trash novels, I could barely make sense of what was going on.
Some good stuff, keep up the great work