Writing a review for the fp, seems interesting from the synopsis though, I'll probably give it a shot
The story is progressing fine. Writing quality is good. I would suggest less of gore. But then if that is your story style, you shouldn't stray. Overall nice story. Good luck.
Here I am... Again! I like your writing style as already said...You don't struggle, like most of us (no engish speakers), with tenses, style or grammar. This is your advantage over most of the authors on Webnovel. You use it for the perfect! Your story has everything a good novel should has (interesting storyline, expressive charcters, etc.) Definitely, you can write! Nicely!
The way the author set up the world was fantastic and sort of fast paced but it was well done. It is just started so I won't give it a 5 star review I might change it once more content is added. But so far the story has been great it gave a small backstory on the character and set up the plot rather nicely it just has 8 chapter so far from the time of my review but I give it a 4+ hopefully the author explains the world and it's cultivation so it won't be another martial God asura
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Author here, just want to leave some note here in memory of my cat. This year have been a terrible year for me, and it became worse with my cat walked away from home, I think she will never come back.My cat is already 17 years old. I had made a terrible mistake to left the door open unattended and she got out. Cats know when it's time. Unlike human, they are not scared of it but they prefer to pass away in peace and calm, that's why they go out when they are old and never come back. Her name is Princesse, a french word for princess. She wasn't with us originally but was with our neighbor. One day they moved out and couldn't keep her, that's how she comes to us. She was already 15 years old back then.I wasn't that willing at first because she was old and the feeling of losing a companion pet is too terrible, I don't want my girlfriend to experience it, at least not so soon.But then she slowly grew inside us. She wasn't the sweetest cat nor the most playful nor the most beautiful. But in our heart she held a special place no other cat have. We feel terrible, I held my tear because I don't want my girlfriend to depress and heart shattered even more. But I cried in the shower. The feeling of losing a close one is truly terrible. She left without even saying goodbye. It wasn't fair for us.This novel is started with a part of inspiration from Princesse. I hold this novel dear and will continue to the day it finished. For Princesse and all of our future cat. Maybe she didn't pass away, just broke through the next realm in their quest to the peak of power.Rest In Peace Princess, 01/03/2001 - 19/08/2018In memory of our loved one.
Read reviews that was written on the novels opening page. The first chapter reads in chronological order as a spy novel should. The first chapter is just a little bit long and could be broken up into more than just the one. Other than that, very well writing with suspense included
Inspired byHyde ParkinLondon, the park, which is dotted with palms,acaciatrees, and tropical foliage, is considered as one of the few "green" areas in Makati.
In my opinion I couldn’t stay focused on the story. The plot was good but the abilities need a bit more development. The book is good, but I will not be rereading it.
Exclaimer: This reveiw is based on my opinion and my opinion only. Others might disagree so don’t expect to see a review you want. So right off the bat, imma just going to say it is plain boring. You can read and know what is happening but it dose not make you very excited. The entire novel just seems... well... plain. Second, it is pretty hard to read. This does not mean that the grammer is bad, it just means that reading and trying to understand everything takes more brain power than normal, and personally, reading is a time to relax, not use your brain. Next, and last, is the humor. I read a lot of novels with bad humor, and I can still ignore and easily get through them but a novel 80% comedy that is not even funny to me, I just can’t. The humor is quite dry and it is part of why this novel was so boring for me.That is all.
Can't believe the story ended. I have been reading and having fun with this story for a while. I am sure I'll probably never forget Xue Ren. Your writing did have flaws but it was also beautiful and brought out the mfouons in all characters. Thank you so much for blessing us with such a work and I'm looking forward to reading your next book!
I like the concept of this story it is far different from your others and it has a lot of potential, i love your characters and the plot, keep up the good work and good luck with the wpc.