very nice plot. keep up the good work ...
Can’t wait yo read something that’s different from the normal ‘ahhhhh you have offended me by doing what’s right i shall destroy you and your family’ crap
First of all, this author seems to have a problem with women and everyone who isn't "asian" (probably means chinese). There's plenty derogatory remarks about women and ample statements how asia, asians or asian culture is the best and everyone else falls behind.
To some degree that's not exactly unusual for CNs but it's a bit too prevalent in this novel for my taste.
The Translation is decent. There are no glaring grammar or spelling mistakes. But there's also no regard for sentence structure or "reading flow". So while you won't have problems understanding the story, it is also not an enjoyable read.
The story is just bad though. Character design is about the only positive point I can find. Other character (than the MC) actually have their own personalities. They're not mindless puppets or empty dolls like you'll find in some other CNs. There's no "arrogant young master #123" and the characters aren't just stereotypes.
But the world building and story progression is beyond bad. The story is nothing but a "look how awesome I am" show for the MC and the world building makes no f*ing sense. Not to mention there are tons of plotholes.
For example: The MC chooses a humanoid Mecha in the virtual game world and everyone makes fun of him because of it, since the humanoid mecha has no armor. But then the MC goes on to oneshot everyone of his opponents anyway. So what exactly was the purpose of armor in the first place, if it doesn't protect against hits? And why would NO ONE ELSE get the idea "maybe dodging could work"?
Honest reviews are here.. I saw my previous reviews have been hidden.. lol.. I gave 4.6 stars before and positive feedback.. I think my review was hidden by the author might because of spoiler detail..
It is unbelievable that my review got hidden, so I refresh it many times and go other novel to see my other review.. Then come here again, I still can't see my previous review..
So now, when I saw my previous review were hidden, I would give new evaluations.. 1.6 stars.. I hope the author is happy with my review now..
90 % of words are over written, an 50 % are un needed and over descriptive , beyond what could be acceptable or fine.
Premise was fine then ,
2 bit piece of junk writer happened, maybe he cant fill more pages ortherwise. With a work that cant be resumed at 10 pages , like this.
And let no begin with plot holes. Puuf
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LoL what happened to the ending? why did it feel like the translator just decided to summarized the later parts but terribly done, just to end the story.the story still have so many things that need to clear up like reviveng zhu yuheng soul, meeting up with ji qinghuan, about the xia universe uniqueness, his best friend chen fan, the battle robed uncle that was left behind, meeting his mother and so much more.Why did it have to end like that, a good story ruined by the unexpectedly failed summarized ending.
The first 390 chapters were translated very well. But it looks like the original translator stopped and then another translator took over later. The new translator has changed the names of everything (sprites seem to have become elves) as well as having appalling spelling and grammar. Honestly chapters 391 onwards reads like it is machine translated and gives me a headache. Sad really as I liked this book.
Accordimg to the first 4 chapters this story is a bit different from the usual cliche. Hope u write more and this book become a success. Btw the start is really good.
Translation is done really well, and the story is pretty entertaining. Nothing really to complain just a couple small things here and there not worth mentioning