"I can't really rememb- ah! Could it be?" (Melissa)
However, there would definitely be passersby.
this book should need attention i love this genre❤️
I'm at chapter five and i have to drop my review.keep up the good work author, anticipating more chapters ??
This is a steady MC done right.MC is pretty powerful in terms of skills and ability, and not stupid af compared to other novels I've read.
Hi @IamNaz i want more of this novel! Moreeeeeee! I already read it 5 times! Hehe...... Can you add another chapter pls?? ????? ..I will wait for your updatessss..
It’s ok but it really could have been a lot better. Even the description doesn’t make any sense, while the quality may be good everything else is pretty bad.
Revenge of the NPC, I hope? I love the idea of an NPC getting access to player powers. But I wonder if he will be able to really work out what is going on,
The writing style is highly polished, and I can infer that the author based it off of more traditional novel styles. The method applied by the author in which they developed the world, plot, and character archetypes alludes to styles utilized by Tolkein, Faulkner, Austen, etc. Easy to comprehend, and there isn't a stress of dialogue. The presence of multiple main characters is interesting, and they're represented well. From what I'm reading, the characters are mostly reticent and not very outspoken, which is well complemented by the lack of direct statements of speech and thoughts, rather revealing their actions to implicitly display them instead. However, dialogue is indeed present in the latter portions of the novel. That it isn't abused or placed as the central component of the novel, is a refreshing find.The emphasis on worldbuilding in the prologue could be stretched over the first few chapters. However, it's still a good read nonetheless. Compared to the other novels in this database with their overemphasized, dramatic explosion of a beginning, this novel with a slow, more relaxed and indirect development of the plot is truly an interesting and refreshing find.
good work for me,I would sayI like the MC's characterplease make room for explanation of cultivation levels.because so far the higher cultivation levels are a little confusing, I don't expect the reader to pause and start checking who's stronger than who.good and beautiful work so far, I hope it's eventually selected soonest.thanks.
In the initial three chapters, Jack is depicted as a grandfather who longs for family bonding, but is isolated from them through a series of unfortunate events. The unfortunate events he experienced makes it seem his attachment to his world will fade after the initial shock of being transported. In summary, Jack is a likeable character. Although, the new world background has not been fully introduced yet. However, judging by the quality of the story and the first interaction with the new character from the New World, it will not be disappointing. Something I found interesting is how the main character ends up in awkward situation as soon as he is transported.
I like it. For now there isn't anything magical so some people might find it boring. This novel is similar to anime like One Piece, My hero academia by that they fight by their will. You know like 'I'll never go down until I beat you' kind of stuff.