this seems really interesting!! hoping for it picked !! ...........................................
Translation: Either the author sure loves to repeat himself or it’s the by product of what’s obviously barely edited MTL. I feel the truth is somewhere in the middle.
Characters: At this stage feel pretty one-dimensional, but interactions so far have been pretty light — who knows, they may gain some depth in the future (if this is picked).
Word Building: Is as can be expected of novels of these kind, but again that could very well change in the future as this is only the beginning of the story.
Overall: It’s okay — not great, but not terrible either. And it’s only 20 chapters, so why not give it a shot?
Hoping for more updates soon. Though I am impatient...
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before you read this author's novels- know that he abandons them in the middle. he stopped luck is a charm novel..........................................
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So i want a novel like this where the people get stronger when they play the mage for example(cultivation online and mages are too op).
if you any recommendations write it down.
In short, MC is a mercenary in the game "free fire V2.0", but outside the game he is a loser and homeless.
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When I started reading I was a little bored to be honest, but after reading the begging I was very excited to read the next chapter after I finished the previous one. And there's so much unexpected developments (at least for me) that it keeps me reading and waiting for more. But when you switch between characters and don't say who's point of view is that it keeps me pretty confused. Thank you very much, Kami_Ada~ <3
Shameless author here! I am trying to write a story that you can appreciate, my post schedule may be a little inconsistent but I wont give up on this if you guys dont give up on me!!
Btw, what is the back story of the main girl 'Cait'.........................................................................................
2 novels in this group are really good, lets hope that it list 1 of then will be pick up, the 2nd novel that in my opinion is even better than this one, and the best in this group of novel is : "Starting From Fooling the Elderly into Registering for a Cultivation Training Class" , lets hope thet 1 of them will be pick up. :)