the comedy is good and the concept seems new and refreshing . I recommend you to read it
I like this for its simplicity and complexities integrated in a same scene. Simplicity of the character is awesome, and the complexities of the world and culture are huge Great work !!!
I thought I was tired of life but then I came across this work. It was the best thing I've ever read. I hope the author gets more recognition. Symphony of Darkness>Reverand Insanity and your favs...
Approved quality. Smart Mc, high quality R-18... Really high, one of the best I've read so far. Epic magical world, plus Mc's personality is everything I expected from a villain. Which is hard to find on this site.
Not a bad start to this one. A magic academy with dark secrets is right up my alley. Not sure what to make of Akari yet but a "bad girl" as the lead is an interesting concept. I also wonder what role Reina will play in this world you're building. Can't wait to see how this world develops as we get deeper into it.
constanly ends words with an s instead of ed sometimes multiple times in the same paragraph, making the entire first chapter feel incredibly difficult to read as if written by a 5 yr old.
Imma be honest it's not for me first of all my main problem with this novel is with the mc race why is it so complicated like 50% of the strongest race in the universe (whatever it is) 30% dragon and 20% human. Why even add the human I mean it's such an inferior/weak race compared to the strongest race in the universe and a fu*king dragon and with all of these dominant races the human side of him should have been so negligible it didn't even register in the system I should probably say he is getting the human side from his father and he is like 80% dragon and 20% human (if I remember correctly) and his mother is the strongest race in the universe so it doesn't make sense to me how he is still has 20% human in him and how are you going to name the novel "the first dragon god" when the mc is 30% fu*king dragon NOTE FOR THE AUTHOR: I'm sorry if i put you down by saying all this I didn't mean to put you down I was just ranting about what's been on my mind for a while now i wish you luck in your writing journey
I totally love your use of words, your metaphorical expressions and how real and authentic you are, you’re doing a good work here, I just hope you would indent the paragraphs properly , it makes reading easier. Either ways , I going to see the end of this book. You can also check out mine; A Millionaire Up North, and leave a review , I’ll do much appreciate that.
This story weaves an eerie, atmospheric tale filled with unique concepts and a compelling protagonist. Sterling’s journey through dark, twisted environments, coupled with his internal struggle and the unexpected plot twists, creates a narrative that is both engaging and suspenseful. While some areas could benefit from clearer exposition and deeper character reactions, the story’s vivid world-building and intriguing premise make it a captivating read that leaves you eager to see what happens next.
very good interesting novel with good plot
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