the soon," He walked towards her, hands outstretched, flames biting at the air. "Come here little
He couldn't help but wonder how Kaiden was doing. Thinking back, he was the first person to really help him get used to this new environment.
Beautiful! Absolutely Beautiful! I am a fan of clear writing, with the capturing of proper details and an inviting edge that keeps the audience begging for the relief of thrill.I must say that this is a work of art. You know sometimes, true Horror is not the monster in the closet. But the one in the mind. Truthfully, this book calls him out. truly beautiful...
Reviewing for FP. Keep up the good work.
Across the room, Aileen was firing arrows with her bow faster than the eye could see, yet the arrows were hitting the bulls-eye, every time, and splitting the previous arrow in half.
Ok, now this is quite good for a change of pace, what else should I say, just read it, it's definitely worth your time... ?????????????
I am so inlove with this story... Thanks for this.
"{I never needed to say this before, but please read at least a hundred chapters before you leave a review. Thank you}" - quote from the Author.Only allows you to read 40 chapters..... Yah..... kinda seems like I won't be reading this. I understand the need to be payed for your work but if your not going to even allow the "you need to read this to even understand if you will like it" then I can't say much more of it. I'm not going to pay for 60 chapters to even have a "chance" to understand it.If you don't want reviews before chapter 100 then why are you forcing people to pay for it? Also I've noticed everyone hating on people who only "read 40 chapters" like come on. Your entire pull is the evil MC but you don't get any of it till chapter 100+? It sounds like a lot of build up and might be good but as a preview of work it's fair. There is nothing going on and I will review it as such. Don't read unless your willing to pay for the "hope" it's good. I can't comment about much of this story but it's not worth the time to try unless you feel like paying for "hopes
Updates seem to be good, but there are many silly mistakes, which shouldnt be there, like sometimes he writes something small, the next time he writes it bigMc is okay, and I like him, by why does he want to kill his little sis just for a bit of power, god, you are the author of the novel, are you that useless?Big world, rest seems fine
Like who gives their own book a five-star review. I didn't want to do this but I had no choice.I'm writing this review for readers who have questions. Please ask your questions below.This is my first book and I hope not to disappoint.Thanks for reafding ?
Ooo the synopsis just pulls me right in.. I hate it when the MC's best friends turn against him when he will do well~Go Kila!! Fight for survival~
This book is a mix of slice if life and fantasy which make it great as those are two good genre's mixed together and the author managed to bring out the best of both. At the moment I am writing this the book has 30 chapter and thy are all great, there have hardly been any big mistakes I have noticed and the author keeps a good update schedule. The author also reacts to our comments so you can tell he puts a lot into this story. The only reason I could give this book a perfect rating is because it's only in my 3rd of my top 5 books I always read.