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The concept of the novel is interesting. I really like reading this. I hope that this novel will be released soon. I can't wait to read some more. ?❤️❤️❤️
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This was a fun, light read. Characters were well fleshed out and each chapter was detailed. Looking forward to reading more of such. Well done!!!
Interesting story! Has a hooking start, and interesting character developments. At first, it might seem like the typical cliché stuck-in-a-videogame type novel, but I can assure you, it's much more than that. The first few chapters are simply character introductions and setting up the environment, but I expect the story to skyrocket as more chapters are released. Overall, this was definitely an easy read, with hardly any grammatical mistakes or inconsistent writing flow. ;)Definitely recommend this light novel to anyone who's looking for an exciting joy read at 2 am!
This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
this is just sad can you just transalate an "evil" mc or atleast a smart one im tired of these novels whit 20iq authors.we need novels like warlock of the magus world and
HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!!d writing quality is gud & story development is well planned! I thirst for more each time I finish one....the author did a good job at describing each scenarios, specially the fighting scenes. I luv this! keep writing please.
before you read this author's novels- know that he abandons them in the middle. he stopped luck is a charm novel..........................................
I love the novel. It's hilarious, and yet the story progresses very well. A flaw is the romance with the Ji girl. The story begins poorly, but it develops rather quickly. The fighting scenes could use some work, but because YY is more of a schemer than a fighter it can be accepted that his fights are one hit kos. Overall, an excellent novel
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Just love the soul land/douluo dalu series !! This being the 3rd Seeing their family become the greatest soul masters of all time and meeting friends that are extremely talented too is so much fun. I love this story !
