You have very good spooky stories and your grammar is good too so i think it deserves 4 stats from me
This book is really amazing! Its have been so long since I read a true Xianxia story and I can said that this novel have not disappointed me yet.The author make his mc grow slowly and with hard work even though he make his mc born with a strong bloodline and physique.Other than that, this book also have a concept element.For example the mc who used spear as his weapon have comprehend a Spear Concept!I just want to said that if anyone would like to read a Xianxia Story, I really recommend this book to you all.This book own a good character growth, steady update and long chapter.
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Definitely, the author indeed noted that English is not his first language even so, he had do so great with the right diction to describe the event of this book. The world background is great and the story development is excellent. The writing technic is over all great and I easily recommend this book to everyone.
I have to be honest I am completely weirded out by the novel. You know Twilight right ? That werewolf guy Jacob that saw Bella pregnant with the vampire Edward's child. Smelled her daughter somehow in her belly and decided to raise her kid before getting romantically involve with her ? That is how I felt reading this.I have read up to chapter 23 and towards the end I could not continue anymore because of how uncomfortable I felt, exact same feeling. Like right that moment MC is two days old and the girl has fallen in complete love with MC both body and mind. I know it's not technically pedo since they are both kids but MC is still a baby. The elders knows, the grandmother of the girl also see through it and thinks it's ok.Like look, I know the title of the novel and it was because of it I was thinking to myself I will finally be happy to be able to find a novel without romance however not only did I not get what I wished for but I can already imagine reading the next chapters about a little girl grooming MC to marry him later and this is as bad as what Twilight had made me feel.Translation quality 5Story development 2 (Very slow)Character design 1 (Too 1 dimensional)World background 5 (Takes from other novel, no creativity but ok not bad I guess)
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Sees Godly Model Creator on webnovel.
*excited breathing intensifies*
Notices the translator is still Yorasu.
Proceeds to slam desk into face.
The main character in the beginning, was someone you could empathize with. Then, you start cheer for him. Throughout the rest of the story, I found myself hoping he would find the life he dreamed of and worked so hard to get.
I say we give this a try as its sort of new, I guess?----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I read up to chapter 43 and my opinion is that this novel is very good I loved continuing with this work of art I can't live another day without new chapters
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