keep up author don't get anxious for some bad comments I think this is a good book.
but try to bring something new to it and don't make the mc simp for every woman he meet .
it's really good so far I came here after reading the author's previous book
(check it out that one was good )
, also author did the the mc's home world become something like players (or hunters) and rifts (dungeons) .
and will there only be two worlds (home world , and the fantasy world) or many more
I read up to chapter 14, story was fine, there was quite a bit of grammatical mistakes, and between chapter 13-14 a character completely changes personality without warning, and forces the main character "ie plot" to do his bidding. Overall, not that optimistic towards the story.
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It's honestly a really good book. It's pretty funny which is a plus so yeah. There are some translation errors though, so do beware of that.
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-12 chapters in-Another novel with a main character who should be OP right off the bat but is stifled by various rules and regulations. The mc has 1 unique aspect and thats his “infinite domain”, which sounds cool but just means he can continuously expand his territory, like every other god in every other novel like this. Except, for them, it’s just assumed they can expand there territory and they have another unique trait, here it’s his only unique trait.There is essentially no world building. We know of a forest, city, and a town ridden by plague. We know nothing about the worlds size, structure, or history. what is mentioned is not described at all.The mc is supposed to be the first god on this planet but for an unexplained reason, he’s late 3000+ years and Is significantly far behind the rest of the gods.Theres no character development. The mc has no goals or aspirations. He probably has some but the author doesn’t tell us a lot of things, like the other 60+ gods are all familiar to the mc and how, maybe, many people from earth were transmigrated. The first girl he meets is one dimensional and takes an interest into the mc for no reason. The family that worships mc aren’t described and they have no personality.The pacing of this novel is odd. The mc is setting up his personal followers, going to school with, I assume, only the goal to get stronger, and he’s learning about his place in the world. These three major plot points will be discussed multiple times within one chapter with very little actually being achieved.
Interesting enough to recommend to be translated. MC isn't stupid, and the opposition isn't stupid either. Of course, that is only until chapter 40, so maybe the story will get worse. I would definitely people read this story though.
Ketis was one of the best characters in the story and could have developed into something great. I always though ves and ketis would be like brothers and sisters since ves once mention wanting a sibling but as usual author wrote ves as a dumb and boring character and didnt explain and stuff and also made ketis like him. Ketis and Ves would have been a great duo and not in love kinda way but more of a sibling kinda way and he would have had someone he could really trust. Kudos to the author for ruining another great character. Great job as always man. You keep your readers proud of you.
cant wait the mc to make his body holds the full power he have..
Not that happy that this didn't make it through to be selected, has great potential and hope it either gets picked up later or by someone else.
I like this story
It has some great potential
we can only hope
It starts off promising the MC has a dice that increases/decreases luck. It starts off fine, but quickly makes me sigh. All the world famous works are gone and now he can find a way to exploit that. The idea of a lucky dice in itself is promising, there was no need to turn it into a stereotypical novel.