I picked this by chance to read about it and when i started reading it i realized i really enjoyed this. Though still i am only on chapter 47 I am excited to continue this till the end. This is not something I usually read and so far I recommend it
It's hard to like it when i'm so offput by the constant ''miss'', it wasn't so bad at first, but my brain has started shortcutting.
I simply cannot wait for half a year, if it even gets picked, to get to the part where the main leads interaction become realistic.
never thought i'd get to this point
It was the first webnovel I read and also one of the best. The only negative point is that the novel is very short, other than that one of the best
the quality of the writing is sufficient, I can understand.
The character development is good, the author describes the character of Arthur well.
The storyline is a bit slow, but worth it because the author includes the main story in it.
Everything is ok, could be better.
This is definitely a good read. Being pulled into your own novel? now that's some thrilling kick-ass book right here . The character design is stable, and the story development is quite good too. Though the author still needs to work on the writing quality for it is essential , but overall this novel is a hit!
Awesome job Author. Believe me or not, I just got completely immersed till three chapters, trying to figure out Carl then itself. The plot is totally interesting and wish you could take care of punctuation for better understanding.
Your story has potential to reach up high. Best of luck and keep us entertaining with your amazing work.
Shameless Author here! hey guys I am the author of this book and I have got to say.... THIS IS THE BEST FOOTBALL NOVEL ON THIS PLANET!!!!!
So this was actually good. I started with the thought of it being mediocre since it has grammar errors and such but boy was I surprised. Yup I enjoyed it and would 100% recommend.
I don't know what to say but keep up the good work everything is great writing is very good and easy to understand the characters are beautiful written this is the thing I wanna read
Okay book.
What I like:
Writing quality is good. The quality is consistent and I'm enjoying it.
But, it could add with some more description.
Story development is good. It's pretty interesting. I like how the system doesn't give him everything (read to find out) and how it's not completely cliche as the Mc was the 4th strongest of the world.
But it could get rid of some of the cliche elements like: Archehon causes trouble, Archehon wins, Archehon goes back to do something else. But seeing how the author is a newbie, I'll look over it.
Character design is okay. Could definitely improve a lot on describing them since it's hard to know how they look like exactly.
Updating stability is something idk. since I started reading this after the break. (I hope the author comes back from the break since I'm enjoying the book).
World background is amazing. I like some of the unique ideas and names the author comes up for the abilities and heroes. This is by far, my favourite element.
Overall, decent book. Before I rate it again, I need to get more chapters. :D
This might be my favorite novel that I've read on this platform. The writing quality is very well done, characters have personality and life to them, the plot and setting is very interesting, and is all around fun to read.
The main character is incredibly well written, and the contrast between his new life and what he was before is so fun to see, along with how that causes him to react to the world around him. The other characters also seem well thought out, and the dynamic between him and his sister is great.
Very few grammatical errors, and overall an amazing book!
it's a shame that webnovel keeps butchering these great novels with bad translations i was looking forward to reading this novel