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Everyday I lose more and more faith in Webnovel and it’s readers. Chapter 1 had me going to check the blurb since I only checked it out because it was recommended and didn’t read it. Why is this community so obsessed with I N cest? How can authors even stomach writing the scenes? Do they fantasize about their own mothers and sisters? ???. I like the h***m genre, but with the increasing amount of I n cest in h***m novels, I may have to go with single fl from now on bc apparently it’s too difficult to keep a family wholesome ?. Good luck on your future writing endeavors ✌?
Wow. what are ending. I cant get over all the twist and turn and the ending is really something else. the suspense is too much hope to see a second book
This story is inteded to be a modern comedic story, well thats what it intends to be, but until now it is just the story of a nouveau riche who just gets drunk on his riches, slaps the faces of all other love rivals and the chicks just love him without real reason.yeah the mc is just too shallow, author says he comes from the countryside and is nice to his parents blablabla, but truthfully the mc is just a vulgar dick, seriously **** out of someones mouth? this story feels too rushed and the sidecharacters are too brainless, like the teacher chick. seriously wtf is she thinking loaning money by prostituting herself. or the one who cucked him also the wenfeng guy, like stfu if you got slapped 3 times you should know to be a bit more careful. also wtf is wrong with the mc showing off his wealth so openly and so fast, in return no one questions where he got all that stuff from. everyone just goes along with it, just normal for poor students to keep national treasures under their pillows and carying around perfectly preserved tang dynasty treasures.
This is better than I thoughtGood writing qualityAnd I enjoy reading itGood luck, writer ╰(*°▽°*)╯╰(*°▽°*)╯╰(*°▽°*)╯╰(*°▽°*)╯╰(*°▽°*)╯
Chinese name: 地球人实在太凶猛了Chapters: 450(ongoing)Start Date: 20/04Author's other works: Forty Millenniums of Cultivation, Genre: Science fiction.
The world is advance where a slightly rich friend can have a personnel jet that can be land in front of people courtyard without any freaking rule to disallow that I mean what if the jet malfunction and hit the building , people can die from any random explosion just because the stupid decision human can make (at least explain that the jet is automatic or have set pattern of air highway since it's the future ) the author don't even describe how futuristic the world is like how the gadget and tool efficiency .Now the current story is just a forced Xianxia in a Sci-fi world which is F*cking terrible with no story development about how normal civilian is given right to even go to the *mysterious space called God’s Sanctuary, where lived numerous unknown creatures. Here, humans will make the greatest leap in their evolution to create the most glorious epoch in history* quote from the synopsis , IT'S JUST A NEW DIMENSION OR A POCKET REALM ,THE STORY DON'T EVEN TELL YOU HOW DO THEY EVEN KNOW IT'S A SPACE AND NOT TELEPORT SOMEWHERE ELSE. THERE ARE NO SCIENTIST AT ALL JUST FORCED XIANXIA IN THE FUTURE WHERE TECHNOLOGY IS USELESS INSIDE THE SPACE AND SUDDENLY ALL PEOPLE DON'T CARE ABOUT OTHER DYING BECAUSE OF STRONG MONSTER AS IF IT'S A GAME .OH WAIT IT IS HALF A GAME BECAUSE THE UNWORKING TECHNOLOGY SUDDENLY BECAME A SYSTEM THAT CAN MEASURE EVERY UNIT OF GENE AS STAT THAT IMPROVE YOUR MARTIAL ART'S POWER (GENE DON'T WORK LIKE THAT AND GENE DOESN'T HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH SOUL SO THAT MIRACLE LIKE A BEAST SLAIN SUDDENLY CAN GIVE YOU ARMOR WITHOUT EXPENDING ANY ENERGY FROM ANYWHERE JUST BECAUSE YOU ARE LUCKY ARE STUPID!) The character literally don't have fear in this world as if everyone just got out of world war 7 and don't care people died by them or to be precised just next to them ,until the author find it convenient to make them scared or traumatised(oh my just like it's normal to see someone dies in battle again'st raid boss note:RPG) there are no real true professional for hire that can be find here like mercenary , assassin/bounty hunter , SOLDIEEEEERRRRR that is send there to investigate but college people who just learn a little bit of martial art is send there as if every government want it's people to live past 500 years for no cost and everyone can teleport in and out within a convenient room for everyone each , the teleport room have no cost and tax doesn't exist in this world. I'M DONE
Good read ?Highly recommended!!!!5 stars.
hahaha readers are all getting screwed by the author
I was intrigued by Adan and the naughty, little demon girl. But as I started to read I felt drawn to them. They are so special yet like any other person. I just felt I didn't want their story to end. I want to know more about this universe and its characters as well. I want more! ;)
i love the story
The storyline is interesting. Sadly, the book is full of grammatical errors and the author uses the wrong character names several times. The author is aware that the book needs to be edited, but no corrections have been made.
The story is interesting.Keep it up.Happy new year!More novel to write.God bless.
