This is a very promising story. I hope that this does not get dropped.
As it is just one chapter, I am posting this review for a little motivation. Please make sure that you keep updates in timely manner even if not on daily basis. I like the synopsis, which is kind of opposite of Scheming system and similar to Hero System. Although it is alright taking inspirations from other pieces, but remember to stand out. ✌️
In-game story is very good and entertaining... Just feel the other sometimes is too into the virtual reality that forgets real world development... Almost feels like a trapped in virtual reality novel...
I normally don't write a review for a book, so I hope it's not too messy. Since I'm not really a fan of the scoring system on Webnovel, you can pretty much ignore that part. First of all, I really like your story so far and hope you will continue writing.The story is well paced and I really like some of the gimmicks you built into the book. For ex. that hardcore players appear like NPCs or more recently, that he killed the snake instead of gainig a super OP pet snake with a hidden dragon bloodline... Which doesn't mean that I'm against a cool pet companion. Just do it right please. There are some grammar mistakes, but nothing really noteworthy, since they don't interrupt the reading flow. The updates are good I guess? I just binge read everything as soon as I found the novel. But from what I can see, it's stable enough.In most cases, the story is a hit or miss for me. In this case it's a hit. The genre of videogame novels or more precisley VR Games is nothing new and I guess most people who are reading your story already read one in the past. What destroys most of those stories for me are their utterly absurd amout of stats/numbers and boring plot armor that saves the MCs everytime. That's the reason why I like Dale, who spent a really long time training himself, starting in a higher leveled village. I like it even more, that he might be strong physically but doesn't have the knowledge in the fighting aspect (techniques).It's too early to really score the character design and the world background so I will work with what we already have. For the characters, we only have some information to Dale and some of the NPCs in Resko. Even then, step by step we learn more of the characters and their wishes and goals. I hope that even Dale will be more fleshed out as soon as he isn't in this constant race with the other players anymore and we will have the time to know more about his beliefs outside his wish to get stronger. Hislast dialogue with David was really interesting, since his worldview is already changing.The world of Azimuth has so much potential. We didn't even get to the Elden Throne part in the title yet and are still inside this little village somewhere in the south, but I'm already captivated by the world building. The world is huge, with the main continent still not entirely explored and many other continents still waiting. The real strength of the natives are not yet shown and I'm really interested to know, if there are other fantasy races.At the end, I really hope that there will be minimal to none romance, as the author already mentioned in the synopsis. If there is a romantic realationship planned for Dale, at least don't make it harem. Please just let him be with one woman... Harem is by far one of the worst trends of Webnovel and what destroys most of my reading experience on this site. As some final words to the author, even if this novel might not be the most popular on the site (right now), I will continue reading and I'm pretty sure others too. Thanks for reading until here and have a nice day :)
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if you bad at comedy dont write a story bout comedy, this book bcome tottal garbage since elder jing arc, you may think its funny but reader think its just a retard
The most basic use of English. If I were to give an estimate, the author’s at best 5th grade English level. This is just a washed down version of every cultivation novel ever. Fight scenes are pathetically written idk why the 9 other ppl even said the book is good. Prob cos it’s the authors alt
why did u not continue writing this novel? Just wondering what made u stop such a very good and promising story.the plot so far is good and unique, the story is really good but all to no avail.
strong background in science that give the story believable and exciting ... looking forward for the mast release and get pick also... ???
Nice! The plot is very interesting and got a great world-building. I have never read any novels with this type of genre, so it kinda pique my interest. Keep on writing! Best of luck .
Does anyone know what nelda background i forgot but feel she a princess or something? Help! Great book author☺️
Author is just forcing MC to go on self made Hardship which he can overcome with a single thought.