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"This is an arrangement of Landscape Master Huxian, this is his masterpiece. This arrangement purifies the spirit and aid recovery as a whole. Stay here with the other disciples until the selection finishes. Until then, interact with your brothers and sisters disciples. It's good to have some connections when traveling."
This is another reason why there should be no civil war. The Sky Marshal wanted to gain political support in order to gain more power for the war. It would be funny, Ironic and a bit of karmic just if instead that our character gains the public and political support to the point that he is the unquestioned leader of the Federation. If we have a civil war then there will still be doubts. The treacherous Sky Marshal is literally giving us power on a silver plate.
After all that, I decided to go back to the game.
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Read what was free: grammar needs a lot of work. Saying wrong tenses of words, changing perspectives without notice, and other minor errors like wrong words at times. The plot has a lot of holes for me. Can’t gain cultivation from lower cultivation monsters but yet one did at least. Soul coins currency is hard to appraise since something’s cost a lot while artifacts are super cheap. One major plot hole for me is what happens to equipment of those who died inside the dungeon? Also who would ever a place 2 whole armies were practically wiped out??? Are the people in this world dumber then the mc? The world building is almost zero. No since of directions where each kingdom is or how big they are. Wish you luck but seems like enough people read this for you
DEFINITELY should be Read why?It is a very wonderful and bingeful work .This is a fantasy magical based world where the magic isn't bound by laws but is very tangible and every minor detail affects it and overall the world building has been done perfectly .The character development strength wise is not fast paced because of heavy constraints put on her but that still doesn't stops her from becoming strong through the difficultly . as for her personality think of it like a shard that is trying to heal so it takes time .SOME MAY FIND THIS DARK AS SUGGESTED IN THE TITLES but not so dark i think .
The story is a masterpiece of deep emotional connections , relationships and sweet cakes. You'll love the MC and want to imprison the ML for yourself . Gosh is amazing i just love flipping to the next page and am filled with excitement for what will happen next . LIV CHANIN did wonders in this story.
A very nice supernatural investigator novel. I immediately liked the 'arrogant' main character and the story also has some interesting hooking points that makes one want to read on.
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Woowww Loving the world you have built the story already got me hooked right into... The main character was very nicely scripted, and there was a certain sense of mystery that surrounded the whole novel that I really enjoyed. Can't really wait to read what happens next!!
Catchy synopsis. Adding this to library.Can't wait to see more of Alexander.I recommend this book to those of you out there that love adventure.
Well, first off I wanted to elaborate It's pretty fine read, that feels like a proper light novel with just some minor problems. Like logic behind characters actions really screwed, and because of this author have some need to explain how they come to this. A lot of lucky moments, that you could see from just a glance that it's forced. Now more of personal preference.I don't understand how you created it. It's basically shounen cliches stories with sprinkle of smut and a lot of cringe. Mc? Beta guy with wild demon inside of him. How wild demon in him? As far as Japanese cliche allowed him. Just a guy that doesn't afraid of fighting and peaking out girls. With morales and need of showing off and being a hero? Oooph...How good characters? They do dumb stuff regularly, for the sake of a story. I don't know, not sure. How good lewds? Well, if you close you eyes on a lot of cringe lines of mc, and skip his thoughts. It's very mild, I never understood why Damien wild, when he is quite prude and gentlemanly.In the end, it's a huge disappointment in smut area, and as a proper story. If you read some harem light novels, you already see those characters, situations, and already could predict where and how, main character get his mental growth. The worst problem, you still need to read about mc, when there is better character which is Damien.P. S. Did we return in 2013? Where those things where popular, it's even called new and fresh... Bruh.
