Story, very, very nice. Characters very good. Suspense, is very happy. I want read more. I invite people to read too. Promise you be happy and excited too. reader want many chapter. Thank you
Yeah the mc have countless swords, but not enough brain cells to use them. Seriously, the guy switches out for a weaker sword when he is fighting someone a higher realm than him. I get it that you want to act cool and all but dude you are risking your live here. Sometimes, I actually think the mc is a six-year old and is not a 30-something uncle that had transmigrated.
Well written, coherent plot and pretty unique characters. Some very minor over-explanations along with MC being consistently overpowered. Well worth the read.
I am reader that doesn't have the patience to wait for untranslated chapters of chinese/japanese/korean novel and I already have the ability [Auto-Correct](Max)?? so the writing quality doesn't affect me but I'll still give that part a 1 star. Next is about the smut scenes. I think that you don't need to make it detailed everytime. I think you should make it detailed for the first time of each girls with mc and the next time make it short but not vague (like the first smut scene with his companion). Then, there is the part where mc thinks with his d*ck, I think readers should be prepared for that because the TAG already said it. I also appreciate the fact that this book doesn't have the most cliche plot like nonsense face-slapping. Overall, I like the novel and the MILFS lol.
Zero here! It's zero--OOFF!!!Let's see...A typical genre that became popular in Japan from 2012, but originally, this genre first published in 1980. This is a genre that I always edited and supervised...Well, the story about MC got "reincarnated" into world because crushed by truck-kun or car-kun...hummm...Writing QualityIt's simple and easy to read. Keep it up, cause you don't have "Mystery" tag on your novel.Stability of UpdatesYou promised that? Then do it if your wish come true! At least you must make a hanging ending and a bit long chapter. I'm rooting for you!Story DevelopmentI saw "Harem
You know what ill give u a review at chapter 0Writing Quality⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Character Design⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐World Background⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Looking at authors track record I'm fairly sure the score won't be far off.Why wait 50 chapters when i know your work will be a masterpiece if it's half as good as Profane Prince of Domination & Fleshcrafting Technomancer.So noting much to say for now but i'm sure it will be and awesome ride again.Keep up the good work!!!
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