"No… if we use swords, he could get hurt!" The girl named Merra worried. She was sitting next to Alec a moment ago, and then with a smile she slammed a bat into his head.
I love love love the author!Her other novels are very entertaining and doesn’t follow the typical clinche storyline. The story ‘my disclipe keeps dying’ is one of the first I’ve read and was hooked. Then her other novel, which is currently being translated on this site ‘My daddy is the prince of the galaxy’ is also very entertaining and funny. The author gives a lot of unexpected twist and turns that’s very entertaining to me as a reader. I’m so happy and excited this is finally out. I’ve voting for this story for several weeks now.
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"Of course. When he found out that Lei is in danger instead of running away to protect himself, he didn't do it. He will protect Lei because he is her true love. Even if we don't believe in such a thing called true love, forever and fate, there are still people who believe in it. Stupid as it sounds but we can't blame them. That is how they feel and that is how they will live." Gev said unconsciously and doesn't even remember what he said.
This novel is absolute gold. The characters are amazing, the world is amazing, and most importantly, the plot is engaging. The author takes alot of tropes and uses them in new and exciting ways, bringing elements from many genres to create something refreshing and new. I would absolutely recommend this novel to anyone looking for a good read.
It's just average. The story concept isn't original, I read a lot of similar stories with this setup. MC is a go with the flow guy, he's alright. The cheat and background and all that aren't explained, the author acts as if he explained it, but nothing is properly explained. Is it a bowl? a system? what abilities? how does MC know how to create gu? World building is non-existent. Characters are superficial. You won't see any depth in this story. Pacing is horrendous, it's so slow, the author pads words and fills a waste of space paragraphs. Repeated descriptions are a lot. Just felt like I read a lot but I gained nothing. If author focused on producing quality work instead of padding words and filling word count, I might have been interested in continuing to read even if it's a shallow story.
I am a big fan of Second Chance/ Reincarnation genre. I am also a big fan of Modern Day/ Futuristic genre. This is one such story which is a perfect blend of both these genres that is written beautifully. Add antagonists who are clever enough to show extreme subtlety in making their plans work. Simply beautiful! Mind games and philosophical content are and will be expected and whatever is written so far is also beautifully executed and well planned. The MC is strong and has a good mind, but the author ensures that he is not too overpowered and that is another thing which makes this novel even more worth reading. One of the beat works I have read in this site and dear author - You have gained a loyal fan today! :)
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Just because there are three stars now doesn't mean it isn't a good story. There aren't really enough chapters out to rate it any higher. From the few that are out I can tell that we are finally going to get an MC that is truly dark and slightly psychotic. Expect torture and the MC twisting the minds of others. Psychopaths do things typically because it brings them pleasure or perhaps they are merely curious? Their lack of remorse, superficial charm and manipulativeness make them absolutely terrifying. I sincerely hope this MC lives up to it.Rating will be updated as story progresses.
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