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Not what I was looking for.
Let's start with the good things - grammar is pretty good, updates are frequent, most of the characters are believable.
Unfortunately, I can't read a story where an MC should be a 32 yo man, but behaves according to his new age of 12. Literally nothing of his behavior suits his alleged mental age. And when I see a teenager protagonist I drop the story on the spot, no exceptions.
The story also has a dense teenager romance going on, which is always a turn off. Oh, and the system has mandatory quests with punishments for failing aka the worst kind of system. But system stuff is not a focus of the novel and generally only used to show people's stats, so that part is bearable.
AMAZING!
I love the characters and the world that the author built.
And the author is starting to write about music!!
I can’t wait to see the MC becoming a famous singer!
679 chapters in: everything is good. Very structured, well written, good pace, stable character growth. Conclusion: so far it is worth it to spend your coins and invest your time on this novel. I always have to stop myself from getting even the extra five chapters because I always want to know what happens next.
well after read in raw about 100 chaps. The story isnt unique at all. while the first 40-50 chaps are okay. later its just your average typical cn mc. Get the system, get power, find an average enemy, kill enemy, later enemy's friends/family/clan bla bla join in, beautiful female with low IQ getting close to mc. Mc gets arrogant and become magnets for low IQ enemy.
Congratulation, this is just PERFECT for lowering IQ readers
Basically the same thing as the previous sign in novels. Like the Banished one. MC gets sent into bad spot==> Discovers System==> "Attempts to stay lowkey"==> Becomes OP==> Destroys enemies. And then rinse and repeat ignoring the first two parts
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must read this!!!!! highly recommended read this promise!!!!
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I really like this novel, i do hope that it will continue to get translated. Despite what people say, i think MC is actually a pretty well build character compared to other mcs. I'm not saying he is like a full fledged 3d person with full fledged meaningful emotions, i just think he is better than most. Also, the stuffs about first realm and second realm seems a bit later in the story, so i really want this to be translated at least till chapter 100 or somewhere.
Meh, it's as stupid as the other novels of this genre.....................................................................................................
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