This started very well, however in my opinion, it went downhill very fast. The premise was quite unique and interesting, musician's fighting evil and all that, however it quickly deteriorated into an MC who is described to not be a little kid anymore and was a man, run around like a little beta child. The female lead, an annoying little girl who follows the MC and brings him trouble every time and nearly gets him killed twice. As soon as Bai Xi was introduced, it went to sh*t. However, the MC we should have had was Victor, the actual interesting character who hardly got any lines after the MC and him went their own ways. Plus the MC takes AGES to sense aether and it's always like 'he won't be a musician blah blah blah' and a lot of filler, overall the story was very slow-paced.
This story starts slow, but getting better with each chapter. The main character is good, and the background characters isn't forgotten. Everyone has their own role in a special way. Worldbuilding is solid and the story flow is smooth. This story slowly unravel mysteries behind every character as it progressed forward.Conclusion : This a good read. The 1st story that includes almost every tags you can think of (supernatural, sci-fi, slice of life, action, adventure,comedy, tragedy, etc.) and the author still did a good job writing it. This story reminds me of Gintama.Rating : 10/10
won't beat around the bush mc doesn't seem mature for a guy who build a empire and the fact that hes like any perverted kid suchs I mean the first thing he thought about was girls not to get stronger but girls I can't take this type of harem bruh you need strength before you think about those shit and he should know that I think you need to reread your story now like how it's at 100+ chapters and see even though you have your view point it's just like every bad harem we see now a days shameless and perverted mc won't give this a bad review but wont give it 5 stars for a revenge story it started way too wrong your back in the past and you think with your dick first without the system constant mock that the mc is weak for a 10000 year old dude it's kinda sa
So thankful to have a great ending to The King Avatar. While I'm upset that some of these characters retired too early!!! Why!!! How could they!!!! But I'm very pleased to read about the ending :) Thank you
I love how the writer gives just a little information about the MC. It makes me think on how much his ability can help him climb the game's best player.
The endless ocean, dark tunnels, and now we have misty island survival.You know the rules and so do I.MC is a perfect example of generic.He got his cheat that tells him about everything, follows its advice and boom, profit.He goes on to build a water purifier and becomes a water mogul.Sounds familiar doesn't it?There's nothing unique so far except the fact that it's a bunch of misty islands this time.However, one thing to note is that he got a pet. Instead of naming this pet using the regular naming scheme of Little ____. he used "Big" instead, how disgusting who is this person? How dare he spit on our generic traditions.
Shamelessly rating my own novel :PHey guys I just started writing Apex System and this is my first novel so I would appreciate both good and bad reviews as I want to improve as I continue this novel.Anyways that's all for now. Peace out -King
This story is very good. The scenario has a uniqueness to it that I haven't seen from any other apocalyptic stories. The characters have all been interesting. Their designs have been mostly cool, especially the mc. The abilities of the characters have been cool and I'm curious how they will grow as the story continues. There's the occasional spelling or grammar mistake but it isn't too distracting. When it comes to updating the chapters I can't say much. As of writing this it's been months since the last update. It's a great story and I would love to see how it develops.
I love it, the plot, the interactions, and the comedy are all much better than most of what webnovel has. ???????????????????
Hello guysIf you like game like system, unique mc and world background discover little by little you are in the good place.I will upload chapter when i want but a minimum of 5 per week.Hope you enjoy fellow daoist.
It just Gets worse as you keep reading
loved it. the plot is easy and fun to read. the MC is not OP. But his strong enough to stand his ground.the story is a bit slow but love the fighting scenes. MC is cool headed and a bit navie maybe his still new. His fighting skills are more crowed control and support type which is rare to most MC fighting style.