the story looks good but the grammar upsets me :c, also some sudden turns in the naration, like going from he to i in the middle of the naration lowers the seriousness of the work. Some concepts are partialy badly exlplained, but lets say thats part of the story.Author should reread his work a bit more
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Okay, I need to talk about Xi Liye because THIS MAN is something else. On the surface, he's the perfect gentleman—driving her to the cafeteria, picking out mushroom-free porridge, buying her an expensive bracelet. But then you read his internal monologue and your blood runs cold. He literally compares Wen Chu to prey. He says it himself: "The prey I set my mouth on was delivered into my hands by fate itself." And that's not some edgy villain line—he means it. The way he watches her, the way he catalogs her reactions, the fact that he was "bored" at that party until he spotted her shrinking in the corner like a "small herbivore that had accidentally wandered into a predator's den." Chilling. Absolutely chilling. And the worst part? Wen Chu has no idea. She's over here doing mental calculations about how to make him disgusted so she can break up, completely oblivious that the guy she's trying to repel is the one who's actually been hunting since day one. The power dynamic here is so twisted. She thinks she's the one playing games, but she's been played from the start. And that moment when he puts the kitten bead-art in his inner coat pocket—like it's a trophy? That's not boyfriend behavior. That's collector behavior.
I knew it was coming from the start, never been let down by the great mad snail- sama. Welcome to the dao of patience to my brothers and of course to my past fallen comrades.
Out of all the chinese novels I've read, this is one of my favorites.The draw of this story for me is ******, the MC. Usually in these novels we have a ridiculously hyped up, perfect, know it all MC, with a side effect of being a crazy arrogant murderer.The MC in True Martial World is ALL of those things..... except he actually deserves it. This guy started from the fucking bottom and worked his ass off. He also doesn't run around insulting every one, just one of the more chill MCs. It took him so long to ramp up and get strong, now that he is OP? You really feel satisfaction when he sticks it to the dicks.That's another thing I really love about this novel, the face slapping. There's some novels that take that to a ridiculous extent (library of heavens path) and it really turns me off on it. In this novel? It's perfect, Yi yun is fucking hilarious when he wants to be, and pretty much everyone he schools actually deserves it. I love it, he doesn't go out of his way to brag or pick fights but when some punks mess with him? They get brained with a literal brick. Just freaking love it.
The whole novel is basically a cliche faceslapping plot. Like the previous research novel with the testing part and the MC getting the lowest grades.
After 20 chapters I'm still interested ....................................................................................................
Its way better than most of the other trial reads. Unless I find something better, I'd probably want this to be picked.Goes the school route, but mainly to find places to fight monsters(though that isn't explicitly stated).Characters are pretty good, they have feelings and all that jazz.MC is dense, so if you're into that its good I guess.Translation isn't the best, but its mainly typos stemming from confusing names and gendersWord background isn't the best or the worst. its meh.
Hey author i know you treasure this book. But read my review before deleted this comment.First. Everything is rushed. How did 'lucky know thay the mc had a limiter:? It wasn't even mentioned anywhere. And Lucy has killing intent from nowhere. Care to explain not here but in the story.Sceond you are' trying' to get the element of mystery or surprise but you unable to do it.Third the mc has an 'AI' that can look in to the character's weakness. Don't you think that you have added and AI and then the heir of death. A bit to much... The story os great however the turns of events as well the quality is top notch. However, here is an advice. If the first 10 chapters are great then the readers will care to get the money out of their pockets. So please. Make the story much for understand able. What you are doing is writing your thoughts and ideas that you want or thought in your story that you want it to be there immediately. YOU KNOW THEBPLOT AND WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT. BUT WE DON'T. Ask a person to read your story without knowing the plot and you will understand how a reader like me suffers from trying to imagine how mc has AI in his head. Give some details about.
Just by the beginning of the novel, you can already tell it's going to be good. I'm also going off from the experience of his other novel and that's a 5 star for me. The only things he needs to change are little mess-ups with some pronouns and other things. This will be a great read.
Please read my new novel. This time, I wanted to write something new. I hope you guys will like it!..............................................
If you read my bio you’d know that I love FUTBOL!!! ⚽️❤️⚽️ and I hope this is not one with a harem, and a low self-stem or pervert MC. I want team spirit, friendship, and rivalry, romance? It can wait at the door because this sport fan can’t wait for a great futbol novel. Don’t let me down!!