Esta historia es patética, con un Mc demasiado débil, impulsivo, tonto. marica, en resumen de sentimientos débiles es muy frágil y no puede ver mas allá de todas las posibilidades que puede reunir a su favor lo ciegan las emociones, típica historia de mc, retrasado y asustadizo.
First 60 chapters are a treat,the free ones,are nice to read. After that, the quality drop to google translate level, mc
name change, capitalization and punctuation are optional, just spend your coins or fast pass somewhere else. (stopped reading at chapter 86)
Nice story with a nice book cover [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] don’t stop writing [img=update][img=update]
I'll say this, the story is interesting as far as the whole narrative beats and everything but the grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation hold this story back heavily. If the author can clean that up. I think the novel will be even more enjoyable.
Gracias por el gran trabajo hasta ahora y espero que continúes así!!! Me encanta esta obra y espero la continúes... espero actualizaciones más seguidas
Great story
This is one my favorite novels it is a hidden gem
I am surprised it is not very popular I think there needs to be a lot more people to read it
It has not that much of the bad wuxia, xinian, and xuahuan cliches and the ones it does it has a new take on them that is addictive (not saying some of the bad cliches are bad in my opinions)
I hope the author makes this a 1000+ chapters , does not drop this, adds multiple realms, makes this a harem, and adds kingdom building elements
Great one....
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Hope it 'll b long run......
Expect many more
jurgen klopp just announced his retirement as Liverpool fc manager.
so sad ..........
This story is quite addictive. I love the characters and the plot.
Great story author
more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters.
Great potential too early to say really 140 characters oh well here I go .................................. . ..............................