Hey great book! But I think some parts such as chapter 1 and 2 are a bit rushed i think. I think if u slowed down a bit and extended the story by explaining the emotions and monologues, it would make the story even better and worth reading. If me as a reader got an insight to the Demon child's mind it would make the story even better. It just a suggestion for the future chapters. Thanks!
Overall, it's a 5 star imo, the worldbuilding is nice and the first chapter sets a tone for the rest of the story, the characters are fleshed out and have their own personalities, the only problem I had was the grammar which can be easily fixed
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Please continue this book I like it and want to read the rest please
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As of ch. 20, the story is definitely humorous. I can’t help but feel like this novel is laughing at mmos. I am curious enough to want to know where the story is going to go.I also want to ask the author, were you raised in a house full of women? Did they bully you a lot? Lol
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liked it, want more, no other opinion accepted. really appreciated. jaa ne~ ????????????????????????????????????
This is too early to judge as there are only 21 chapters released but I would like to say although not new but interesting concept. Author will have to work hard on improving MC's personality. Previously he was timid, everybody stepped on him, ignored him. Now since he's overpowered I don't wish for him to suddenly chage his personality like a switch but gradual improvement.Comming to the story, synopsis says it all. MC is useless in his world and even after he goes to other world. When it's time to return to his world, time freezes. MC hunts the immobile monsters to gain levels and become stronger. The instant dungeon arc was a little boring although it was short.Hope the story keeps getting better. I guess MC will soon return to his world and face everyone where he will surprise them.