So far everything seems fine as of now, story seems to be based on a world with mutants and special gift. MC has a intresting backstory which hopefully will be explore more and will be a significant plot device.
I'm the author, of course i'd rate my own book 5 stars ........................................................................................................
The only reason you book isn't popular is because webnovel doesn't reward slow progression stories. I read only a few chapters and I already knew this book should warrant a place in the power ranking. Author is wasting his talent here. When you finish the book, please send it to a publisher. I would order the book online if this ever happens.
This deserves a lot of attention, I enjoyed reading this and the great pacing of the story. I was able to get a lot from one chapter and wish to see more! Good work!
I've been waiting for another misunderstanding novel to show up since my last one just ended so abruptly. This one is starting slow, but it's so interesting!
This fanfic is really good! The story plot is not that cliche and has a lot of the author’s original ideas! The author also updates frequently. Overall, you should give this story a try!
There're more chapters on the other sites, please update.
Everything about this is great cultivation, hidden weapons, martial arts, martial souls and soulbeasts..
Hey author i know you treasure this book. But read my review before deleted this comment.
First. Everything is rushed. How did 'lucky know thay the mc had a limiter:? It wasn't even mentioned anywhere. And Lucy has killing intent from nowhere. Care to explain not here but in the story.
Sceond you are' trying' to get the element of mystery or surprise but you unable to do it.
Third the mc has an 'AI' that can look in to the character's weakness. Don't you think that you have added and AI and then the heir of death. A bit to much...
The story os great however the turns of events as well the quality is top notch. However, here is an advice. If the first 10 chapters are great then the readers will care to get the money out of their pockets.
So please. Make the story much for understand able.
What you are doing is writing your thoughts and ideas that you want or thought in your story that you want it to be there immediately.
YOU KNOW THEBPLOT AND WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT. BUT WE DON'T.
Ask a person to read your story without knowing the plot and you will understand how a reader like me suffers from trying to imagine how mc has AI in his head. Give some details about.
A very very interesting take I must say and I had good reading this haha. A fun novel. Definitely gonna wait for it
Chapters : 357
Status : ongoing~
Nice!!!!
As a fellow Brazilian writer I can state Lich writes quality content!!!!!!!!!!!
Also, I'm not sure what else to write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A new genre, fresh concept, and interesting work. The author is very clear about his/her views on the world background. The characters were well developed.
Please actualy read the reviews. The positive ones are spam and the rest agrees on 1-2 stars even if they put more stars in their review in fear of it beeing deleted oh yeah Reviews are beeing deleted