First 40 chapters are fine, but as soon as you start paying for it the quality drops precipitously... from chapter 41 onwards it is straight MTL with zero editing, not even fixing capitalization of MC name or standardizing the previous translation. You may as well read this novel on a MTL a site, I am not joking at all.
best of luck
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Here is the link to the Cultivation Level Comparison Chart between Renegade Immortal, PoT, ISSTH.
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1dSvWxSdVUVGW1ilr-nUet4iMaAxbATkkEMIbzPEAyec/edit?usp=sharing
The opening is very intriguing, good word building, well thought plot, characters are well immersed in the storyline, I recommend this novel, good work author, waiting for more chapters.
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the story has potential, but the bad translation/ Grammer/sentence structure puts me off immensely.
Just being a shameless person since why not? Novel is great, read and find out! The Heavenly Dao stipulates that you should read this novel. Resist the Heavenly Dao and you will face Heavenly Tribulation!
This is a great book.
I've read until chapter 7 and I love every part of it.
The only issue that I've had is the whole 'info dump'. It's been sort of frustrating to read through all of this information in a span of only a few chapters and it's also demotivating.
My advice for the author is to try to spread out all of the information so it's easier for readers to absorb the information. But, this is also a difficult skill to use as, in my opinion, it requires experience.
Other than that, I've enjoyed the book.
wonderful, amazing job! now gave me more chapters ....
This is one of the awesome novel that I have came across to read. I sincerely request the read this novel at least once. I also sincerely request the translator to translate it's all chapters immediately. I'm a very big fan of this novel.
In the beginning of first 40 chapters, the speed of story progressing is slow and may get you bored, but later you will appreciate this novel very much.
If you are fed up with the novels on the topic such as rebirth,reincarnation, system, heaven defying cultivation technique, as if the main character has whole universe supporting him, then this is one of the best novel to read amongst other novels.
just to be sure is it related to death guns in another world? because their are some characters with the same name im confused and don't really understand abouy that part can you tell me if it is or not thanks
Giving solid 3.0 pre-reading based on premise, might change after.
Transfer memories to the brain of 1-month baby.... If this is not a cultivation novel, where laws of biology don't work, the baby is fried. To begin with, pre-adolescent brain is VERY different from an ***** brain - look up "Synaptic pruning". Secondly, infant brain doesn't have enough brain connectivity to begin with, to hold a full stack of life memories.
Unless some very abridged, very packed version of "future vision" was sent, this would not work.