Among all of new trials this is the only one that I'm truly interested.......................................................................
the writing style is detailed and logical. the world background is interesting and hooks the reader's attention.just the paragraphs are a bit lengthy and could be simplified to refine an even more immersive version of the content.overall the story development is good and has a high potential to create a masterpiece.just give it a try, who might know you would be hooked in the first chapter.
Such a Epic Story with realism. can't believe. this is so compelling. enjoyable!! too long to read ?. are more chapters are coming to this Epic??!
story is good and all but the fact that the MC has to f**** every girl that takes a liking to him is kinda a turn off for me and not just a one night stand but he has to make them his wives?? IDK it's kinda too much for a guy who says all he says about his real wife
It's worth reading no dull moments for me
good job i hope for continuations . Thumbs up!!! Ill definitely follow your other novel. [img=update][img=coins]
It getting more and more boring as the story goes on.
It's not that the plot idea is not good it's just the the plot with this Mc is trash.
Stupid hero has nothing to do with Fang Yuan, I embarrassed Fang Yuan's nameStupid hero has nothing to do with Fang Yuan, I embarrassed Fang Yuan's name
Me gusta la idea de combinar la fantasía occidental con el cultivo oriental. Veo mucho potencial aquí. Pero como alguien que lee mucho la novela oriental, el nombre me molestó un poco. Sería mejor si pudiera apegarse a la nomenclatura solo al oeste o al este. Buena suerte.
so i read it all like the 10 chapters and it pretty good I can say their are some grammatical errors but they are like 1 in a 140 word I have great expectations from this story it's good keep up bro
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Only the first few chapters have been published at the time of this review so it might be too early to make strong statements, however I do have to admit that this novel is a pretty good read. It flows so smoothly which is done by the writing style of the author in which they manage to grasp your attention quickly and hold onto that until the very last sentence. I was surprised to see how quickly I read just the first chapter as with every word I read, I wanted to learn more and more. Definitely would recommend to anyone and everyone!
raw link pls