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This had some potential but it feels like you wrote yourself into a corner at the very beginning with the MC being given an incredibly powerful ability. Which leads to you having the MC overlook obvious ways of getting stronger simply so something in the immediate future remains a threat. It also doesn't help that you make the MC incredibly inconsistent in terms of goals and personality. For example, in the beginning the MC is new to the world, possesses a skeleton and enters the nearest town with the goal of remaining low profile and learning about this new world and its dangers, as in who and what to be wary of. He finds a book store, buys all the relevant literature and decides its no long an immediate concern to read them and goes for a stroll... in a body, he already noted attracted attention due to the chilling feel it gave to those nearby. He happens upon an auction, the items of which are mostly sold to a man who is clearly rich and powerful in status as he not only bids high but no one dares bid higher and chance offending him. That is until the last 'item' a slave. Now, it should be mentioned that before the MC even entered this town he came across a bandit camp with slaves, as can be imagined horrible things were done to the slaves and he killed all the bandits as well as mercy killed one of the slaves who endured too much. As for rest despite his anger (which he shouldn't be feeling as X sealed it) he doesn't help them, he just leaves. Back to the auction, the 'item' is revealed as a beautiful demon-girl slave, he doesn't know her story, he has no reason to care for her in any way but for reasons, she gains his attention and he decides to buy her... to gather information... he then keeps doubling the bid of the rich and powerful royal until he wins for a total of 2 million gold. I feel like I should repeat that his goal before all this was to lay low and learn about the world and he keeps flip-flopping like this throughout the novel. In the end he feels less like a character and more like a plot device, he's whatever you want him to be at any given moment so you can drive the story in your desired direction, regardless of his personal history or personality.I can also get into story pacing but I think I'll stop here or this is going to get ridiculously long.
it's great. the story is made well. the characters are loveable and the world building is amazing and lastly I hope it continues for a long time.
This novel has potential.It develops characters and has no sudden forced plot.Tha author has improved a lot from the beginning as I know because I was reading this book from the beginning .Keep Going
Woah! Woah! Woah! Bishop's nemesis you're at it again! Another master piece?A wonderful and interesting start, it's good and incredible. Am awaiting your updates lol!
Ok, this is my review up until chapter 190, which is about in the middle of the second volume. Please keep that in mind when reading this review. Ok, the first time I read this novel I dropped it at chapter 27. The writing wasn't the best, the story, the dialogue and even the characters were just not my cup of tea. The quality just wasn't good. Then I was told to give it another shot and by chapter 13 I was already ready to quit again. However, I continued and as I continued the volume started to get better, and things were getting more fleshed out. You can see that by the end of volume 1 while it wasn't a masterpiece the novel was becoming something worth reading. Volume 2 was also good! The Mc until where I was, had started to act smarter, focused on things that I had been screaming at him to do and the world was looking pretty good. That is until the whole thing with his spell came into being. Spoiler Alert btw but he has a spell that can heal using soul fire. This is pretty nice and the author makes the point to add that emotions are used to stabilise the spell models in his mind. Love and care in this case are tied to soul heal. This isn't bad, makes some ok sense and even adds a lil depth to the power system. What makes this bad though is what comes next. Our Mc has a dilemma about how he just doesn't have enough memories and experiences with showing care and emotion and the artefact gives him the idea to use a side character (who wants to lock him up and arrest him) as someone to fall in love with. He will give his second consciousness the task of loving and caring about this character. Now forget about the fact this is a stupid idea, also forget the fact that loving someone is a huge weakness for someone who is being targeted by multiple big bads. What makes this stupid in my eyes is that he has other options, he can focus that care and love on his dead mother, his grandfather, he can focus it on the kids he is taking care of, and he can make a second consciousness to love and care about him. Why go for someone who isn't even on your side?He ends up saying he will think about it and finds out that this plan will work but will cause him to deal with the pain forever, not to mention learns that one of the bigger bads will probably take advantage of his new weakness to this girl. Then just decided that it's okay and does it anyway. Now im just sitting here thinking if I should drop it again. I'm not a huge fan of romance but this whole situation rubs me the wrong way. Is it fan service? Just an idea that in my opinion is pretty bad? I'm not sure.If the author or anyone who has read further than me sees this please let me know what this whole business is about and how long it lasts. This way ill know if I should just skip through and hope I don't regret it or if I should just drop the novel.
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Its one of the nicer fanfics but has that air of seriousness that draws you to it. There aren't enough chapters yet to be able to judge properly, but so far, I would definitely recommend it especially considering this is one of the few gamer like fanfics.For those of you that like talented and harems this story is for you, though the beginning is a bit dark.
MEEP! MEEP!I feel like this story is a good one for many reasons. The first reason being the writing quality as well as the story and the characters. I find the MEEP a really fun character that I hope to see in almost every chapter. I also like how well the characters are described, and frankly like the prose in the story quite a lot.The author seems really good at descriptions and also at characters judging his dialog and the quality of his work. Feels like reading a real translation, but a bit higher quality grammar wise.
Wooooooo!!! Cultivation story anytime! As for harem…… nil sighted at the moment!!?? Interesting characters and hope to read more!