The cover looks cute and the premise sounds awesome. Plus, the author’s previous works are awesome too. Really. 5 stars
First I love the cover!The story reminds me of Six of Crows. I like Ander. I think this is going to be a very complicated story, but it’ interesting! Just a few grammatical mistakes, but otherwise awesome story so far!
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️. It's just an awesome story
I like the start of the novel. The author did a great job on the narration as well as conversations between characters.You did a good job author! Keep it up!
Here are the novel's pros and cons. Read carefully before beginning, so you don't end up dissatisfied and angry, because you're more than likely going to rant and I'm going to want to bang my head on the wall.
Pros:
1. Reincarnation handled well. There is logic behind it and a relevant reason, though it is veiled behind some mystery.
2. Dark themes. This is not a story of good guy saving the world and basking us villains in the light of his noble morals. It is dark (and unfortunately, sometimes edgy) story with things that would offend people of this era. If you're the type to be triggered, do not read. No one is forcing you to.
3. Power couple. The MC and the FMC are extremely unique and possess a trait that makes them stand above all others, together and individually.
4. Overpowered MC. This means no running away from enemies or always being the underdog. More than likely, you will sympathize with the enemies of the MC.
5. Long chapters. Each chapter is 3000 words long, meaning that there is a lot of content in each of them. Sometimes there is fast-paced plot, sometimes there is dialogue and sometimes there are long soliloquies or narration/explanation/exposition in each of them.
6. Non-scripted characters. One-dimensional or background characters do not say the same type of thing or act the same kind of way in every scene. More often than not, they will speak and act in ways you would find interesting.
Cons:
1. Annoying start. The first 15 or so chapters are 50-50 in terms of preference by readers. I started the novel in Jan 2019, having been off and on with it until August 2019. Those first few chapters have dialogue and actions that are of a typical CN and there are plot elements that might annoy you. After chapter 30 though, every single response I’ve received from readers are approval only, even up to the current chapter we’re on (114).
2. Too many explanations. Sometimes I can abruptly pause the plot to explain what is going on, how it affects the world, the reason why the characters in that scene are doing what they’re doing and other technical details. Call it my own type of filler.
3. Polyamory. There is a power couple and they are linked by fate, but there are other… ‘waifus’ who are there for varying reasons. There is a rule here, that the MC only ‘plays’ with very, very specific ‘waifus’ in the digital world, but is only sexually involved with his soulmate in the real world. Yes, she is aware and has no qualms.
Note: This is not a harem. Harem means that there are multiple women who the MC is sexually involved with, and has feelings for. The MC has feelings for only one person and the rest are digital entities who serve one purpose or another.
4. Plot holes. I am not ashamed to admit it, there are a few plot holes in the story. I fixed most of them, but some were so problematic that I had to roll with them. I recently got a story editor, so that was how I even found out.
5. Fewer releases. My release rate is a constant 1 chap per day at the least with no exceptions, but some of you are used to 2-3 chaps a day from other authors. As I said above, I release 3k words a day, and those who release 2-3 chapters either have a length of 1.5k words or 1k words. So really, is there a difference?
Here’s what to do before reading Guild Wars.
1. Check the tags.
2. Read reviews (both negative and positive, I’ve replied to some of both).
3. Clear out assumptions and comparisons in your mind, otherwise you’d be ruining your experience.
4. Keep the mentality of ‘this isn’t realistic’ out of your mind, this is fiction. What is real is what the novel wants to be real. Assess things based on the logic within the story if you truly want to immerse yourself.
Enjoy your experience!
This is deffinetly a gold that in my point of view deserv to be in the same line with "I have a mansion...." in the ratings. The story is about the guy who for some reason awoken to the power of time manipulation and time travel. And he is deffinetly worthy of such power, as he understands how godly is his power and that he himself desrve to be a ruler of the world. It is a protogonist that seen so much that this world does not pose a chalenge to him. He will enslave and kill those that stand on his way, pulverise anyone that would disrespect him with no questions asked. He is not some pushover with no ambition like all MC's in Japanese issekai novels. Thats how a ruler should be. He is no hero but as he has seen destruction of galaxy and death of the humanity by their own hands (felt it even as his body was anigilated to atoms by atom bombs a hubdred or even thousand time until he learned how to use the power), he decide to save humanity from itself. And thats a story of how he does that. You believe the theory of conspirasy and world government? Well he is the one behind the worlds government!
it is soo good why did it stop??
Very cool book. Love the characters and the humor. Needs a dragon. Make it two. This book is for people who like both Harry Potter and James Bond, but think hey, what if...girls. Yeah.
This is a great story and very entertaining, I read this when I was frustrated but well this is what I was looking for. ha ha ha ha.Thank you author and continue the story.??
Sometimes you look at all those brand of chocolate cookies on the shelf and think "All are just the same what's the difference, does it matter if we choose one over the other without thinking". Yes it does because... QUALITY and UNIQUENESS. This can be applied to the alluring quality of Bee's Reurnee too. In this oversaturated market full of similar books with similar themes, Bee breathes a new life in the genre. The universe he creates is something you'd often heard about in other VRMMO books too but you can't help but think "This is new..." Every now and then. The writing style is top notch and the dialogues are just wondrously witty and the humour is not something that will leave you with a grin but pure laughter that may make your stomach hurt at some point. This web novel is totally different from the others, a true embodiment of the phrase "to stand out from the crowd"
The concept is good. This story could be great but it's somewhat unreadable. The author keep changing perspective that breaks the immersion. and keep using 1st person and 3rd person. Please choose one and stick with it.
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