Translation quality isn't bad at all and since its trial read, It will most likely have a stable update in groups of 5 chapters. It is nothing new as we have had pet trainer novels before however it is a good read.
need lots of update on this novel
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this novel is so good and i love the premise does anyone know any novel similar to this? where the mc has a very strong background and treated like a young master
Even though this genre is heavily written about, the author does a great job of framing it in a new and refreshing way. The dialogue seems real, and the world building is well done. Please keep up the good work and continue writing!
5 star goes without a doubt!!!!!!!!!
Reasons- First the author name was enough. heheh
i all about romance but I decided to give this book a chance. Okay, what got my attention was the book cover and I proceeded to the synopsis and I told myself. I must read this. Sincerely, the book didn't disappoint me which excite me a lot. A great piece of work and looking forward to more chapters!
Although, I do not read this genre but the way it has been written by the author is quite good. I really like the writing style. One thing I'd like to point out is information dumping in one paragraph. It diverts the focus otherwise everything is pretty cool about this novel. I'd definitely recommend this.
The author did well with the prologue, although at first glance it may seem like he didn't put enough in the synopsis of the novel you quickly lose that notion once you start reading. The prologue is short yet enticing giving the readers enough to get a general idea of what the novel is about but also leaving them with an after taste in their brain which demands that you read more. As the chapters continue you begin to be drawn in by the characters and the way the author tells his story. Putting aside the interesting concept behind the story for a new author the writing is pretty top notch and as more chapters are published I'm sure their skill will increase exponentially. Give this book a read you won't regret it.
Writing quality: Very good grammar, it is good to see new books with good grammar on Webnovel, really like it
Story development: The story starts interesting and I, what a suprise, like it. She grows stronger and can evolve, to that is the system no stupid cheat which makes her op.
Character design: She is a normal typical girl, a bit crazy sometimes when she sees beautiful people but cold when needed, which I truly like on her
Update stability: 2 chapters a day is very good, a mass release was there a while ago too, so 5 stars, nothing else wouldnt make sense
World background: Nothing much yet is known, but the story doesnt even have 100 chapters yet, but it is promising
( Is she in Tensura? )
My personal opinion: I like that there is a fmc which isn't the same cliche one, it is refreshing, with her growing party members which I hope won't be that big( cannon fodder not included), loved how she handled her first noble, hope that that with her brother won't be something stupid,
Good luck with the story
You asked for honest feedback, so I have been quite candid in this review. This does not mean I did not enjoy your story, or finds it immensely lacking. I am simply trying to help you progress by giving you some pointers.Firstly, your dialogue comes across as wooden and unnatural. I believe it would help if didn’t put as much exposition in your dialogue.Secondly, there is an absence of rhythm in your writing. I miss a cadence when reading your story. It does not necessarily withhold me from immersing myself, but it would help pull in your reader.Lastly, and this one is more personal, but as a reader I wish for more texture. What are the surroundings like? How is the air? Does it smell? Is it clear? Is the sun blinding to the eyes? I want to feel like I am there with you characters. Give me the cracks in the pavement and the chipped paint of shop signs. Give me the feel of the wind and the smell of spices in the air. That’s what transforms a story from good, to great. And that’s what pulls in your reader.Overall, I believe this story has a lot of potential. It has a clear storyline with good characters, and writing. Well done!
Hello, Eshwar here. Due to something happening I kinds stressed out about it and the story had started to awry (not exactly sure how you feel, but I just feel like I added few fillers here and there), so from the next chapter I'll be back at my own pace, their won't be any noticeable changes though. Anyway, just wanted to let this be known, thank you for reading and. [Peace]ahem, I have posted this in the recent chapter (Ch: Changes) it is just a copy and paste with few new words, anyway, hope you enjoy the story.thank you for reading.[Peace]