Would recommend this too
Under the oak tree?
But you may be frustrated at the FMC. She's a bit weak emotionally
I would like to preface this by saying that I'm most definitely not old. I mean, I grew up watching DanTDM, PewDiePie and the like at the later stages of their popularity. You can probably estimate my age given that information, and even I know, understand, and use "lingo" as a word. I understand that it may be an uncommon word to use in sentences purely due to the similarly uncommon topics that it would be used on but it is most definitely not archaic as you both make it out to be. I really don't get why it's so shocking for someone to use it here.
Regarding the cooking slang I was talking about, it wasn't that popular back then so I get that you wouldn't have seen it, but it was definitely used. It's also different from the "let him cook" memes.
Is it dropped?
Oh hey, the blurb must be talking about America!
Afghanistan, Iraq, Syria, Libya, Yemen. I like the sound of this!
What happened?I was happily reading and so engrossed in the novel than the next page showed aa Incomplete. Update this please.
Enel yearns for the infinite earth. If he remembers correctly, there should be a special mechanical civilization on the moon, but with his current ability, he can not fly from here to the moon.seriously???????????it goes into a spin ...
Seriously this has got to have the worst stability on updates... its been 2 almost 3 weeks since the last update, the story is great and I love it but goodness gracious don't read till 2028 since that seems like the year it will be finished at this rate. it does not deserve to go premium with this quality.
This is missing so many chapters as well as the translator being slow as ****. Thinking that separating chapters into parts is good and that one chapter a day is good. The translator is a complete moron who knows two languages. The translator insults this work and then expects us to pay them in their Patreon. What a dumbass.
Raw please
It is progressively getting worse. it had a really strong start then it had every wrong move and cliche you can think of nothing makes sense its all just getting a pillow from the sky when your tired its bad.
Compulsory Author Review :/
Now that we’ve basically reached the end of Volume 1 Arc 2 (Chapter 23), I thought to write a review. Also use this comment section as Q&A if need be.
The synopsis is pretty sh * t so I need to work on that. The story is one of character growth:
MAIN CHARACTER:
Here we have a fat, middle-aged dork who has to change his ways from becoming reclusive and not being anything to speak about, to becoming rich, charismatic, physically strong, and se * ually capable.
It will take a while.
From these first two arcs, I think I have presented how insufferably pathetic he can be, but also how much potential he has in the tank to become the 4 traits I mentioned earlier. His lowered moral inhibitions will also play a factor in propelling him (rather rapidly) to become an interesting individual and great MC.
HAREM:
My goal is to make the female characters as 3 dimensional as possible, while also making Samuel’s encounters and relationships with each as interesting as possible. I plan to cap the harem to about 8-12 women (including inc * stuous relationships). Flings and s * x friends may be considered once he is actually rich, but for now solid relationships is the way. Harem will be diverse and cater to many fetishes: M * LFs, V * rgins, Bullies, Twins, Bookworm and everyone’s mother lol. The whole lot.
As highlighted in the synopsis, this story will also delve a lot into MC’s interactions with the world at large (AU Earth)… how he grows rich and the details of the process, as well as how he slowly becomes a ‘Chad’.
SYSTEM:
The non-sentient system is a complex tool at Samuel’s behest, that constantly grows and is honestly one of the most attractive features of the story I’ve written in my opinion.
I can’t think of what else to mention here. If you have any questions, leave a comment and I’ll answer promptly.
P.S: Please give my story until chapter 15-20 before considering if it’s worthy to continue reading. I am confident your impressions of the story will change many times over these initial chapters anyway.
Happy reading.