i love the way you express love here? i loved it and hope to see such more intresting stories from you? keep going my loveee❤
Thankyou for this beautiful story!!
I like this book so far since it has a very unique concept. While it does have a "system" (Like all the new books that are coming out) it is unique because it has some sense of Architecture and Comedy in it. I just hope that this series is a long one and not one that ends quickly.
If you are here, please go away and delete this trashcan of a novel. Thank you.With regards, a user.
book is filled with horror, only a few chapters and and i am already scared.
T/N: Am still a novice in translating novel, No group, No team, No partner, just me for fun...Like they say, I don't know who said it, be shameless once a while
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4.8/5Great work by author. The story is incredibly realistic and explores a genre I have not seen before. It's quite intriguing.He could use some work on writing grammar, but excellent overall :)
I have no complaints. This story so far is amazing. Everything from Joshua's character to the little elements of the story makes it so enticing to read. If I was forced to make a complaint, it would be that there aren't more chapters for me to read.
10/10
to translator: I hate when I am about to hug someone really sexy and my face hits the mirror.
story: Our language is called the mother tongue because the father never gets a chance to Speak, that Is, very nice
Character: When I joke they take it seriously. When I am serious they take as a joke..
updatig stability: I don't know!
world background: What kind of place is this? It's beautiful: Pigeons fly, women fall from the sky! I'm moving here!
story's good the writing quality is great but the one thing that's bugging me is this Dudes (MC) Arrogance. it's like he can't be nice for once.
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and that's that huh. I'm going to assume you intended to take a break and it turned into an extended hiatus on this work. probably started writing another book? or maybe you didnt know where to go from here and didnt want to drop the quality writing just to churn more chapters out? Either way, I really enjoyed the story. There was more character growth in this short 200 chapter story than quite a few 1000 plus chapter xianxias... the story telling just seemed to improve with each chapter too. I found myself engaged and engrossed with the story, to the point where I didn't even notice the many grammatical issues. My absolute favorite part was the constant introspection of the main character. it really made the character come to life, and made me care for his struggles. While the world building was the weakest part of the story besides the grammar issues, it was not that bad and certainly served its purpose for the story. I wish you all the best Author, and maybe you will one day come back to this novel, inspired, and write it to a satisfactory conclusion. Afterall, we didn't even get to see Ayda meeting Dearie before it cut off! i looked forward to some cat fights between the two haha