There are a lot of things I don't like about this novel. But there have been many incidents up to where I read it. I wonder how the author will wrap up the life of the Protagonist and make it last. So I don't want to drop it.
Reading this fills me with a nearly uncontrollable rage for some reason.Besides that; The punctuation and grammar of the whole book is terrible. Its clear that they know to put a period at the end of a sentence but just typed this garbage out as fast as possible so no paragraph has a period at the end.The dialogue is boring and the mission system is stupid. The person who reincarnated as Saitama is a dumb simp with no character development or personality.I hate this book so much that my face grew too hot from anger so I had to go take a cold shower to not break anything.Author, I want to kill you.
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The book started really good at first. The ideas were interesting and engaging at first. However, as the story progresses, I feel the author is becoming too long winded in explaining simple things that won't really matter in the long run. Author also likes to overexplain learning of skills that won't really be useful or meaningful in the future as well. Sadly I have to drop this story after 72 chapters.
So far there is one thing that is killing the story a bit for me. The translation. His combat power fluctuates up and down between chapters, the level of his skills is S on one chapter then SSS on the other. MC could be making more trades, but he doesn't. It's not a bad series, but it's not something that will become a top novel.
I'm engaged with this book. The way the author designed the characters and world background are quite intensive. It's not easy to write a clean fighting scenario and give a big applause to the author for this. The fighting scene is very beautifully written in this book.This is the first game book I read and it creates my interest in this genre.Highly recommended ........
Good Job....Nice storyline...Update more frequently author...----Also a quick suggestion:in your inkstone page, you could actually set up a new cover page for your book
Boring . Idiot mc.
So confusing, I’ve read for 4 chapters already but I still didn’t see anything related to reincarnation. Can anyone explain this to me? Appreciates.
I give 5 stars to boost the novel for now, but if no explanation received, I will reduce it.
Keep up with the good work. See ya.
The title of this novel should be "How not to write a cliche story". I don't know why the author even bother to write. Just like other chinese novels the author dumps a back stabber character who supposedly hate MC while he was in his low. Even though he owes him too much. Just character after character was ripped off of old chinese novels without even bothering to design a plot or character. Same old face slapping to character who hate MC with little to no reason.
Great story give it a chance i hope it makes it im already attached to some of the characters now time for giberish to make up the word count sjsjdmejej
I am giving this five stars so I can be the first to do so, that is all. (also the book is cool too, so read that) . (this line is to fill up the required characters to post.)