update pls
honestly, I'm not a fan of fantasy but Z's character is just damn! I'm imagining her like a goddess. Also, I'm very amaze on how the story is being written. Can I have your intelligence? You're too great, I swear! Reading this story is a must! Looking for someone named George now HAHAHA
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Wow... writing 272k words is not an easy feat. You wrote such a wealth of words, I’m in awe of your writing. Speaking about this book- look at that cover! I want to frame it. The story has depth, twists and untold emotions. I’m still in starting chapters, but I liked whatever I read so far.
Awesome book!
A riveting work of art. Can't say how much engrossed I am in this work. The first few chapters got me enraptured in the art. Can't get enough of Moriah and Darian. Absolutely amazing. Five stars without effort
Ok it’s been a while, when’s the next update on “The Fated Queen”?
I really enjoyed this book! It was straight to the point with great twists and turns along the way. Some grammatical errors here and there but still manageable. Highly recommend
This is my first time reading a b x b story. I honestly didnt think that I would be this hooked! Great story, author!
It's a typical cultivation novel where the protagonist gains an advantage and rises above others低调行事, but his background as a transplant isn't a significant focus. The author could've easily brushed it aside by mentioning a few memory fragments from our world without affecting his character much. The slang and inner monologues were probably used as an excuse, but since the MC was so normal in his past life, it felt like a cheap way to pad the story with internet-savvy teenager references.
The主角算得上冷血，但在偿还债务时还算谨慎，不轻易暴露目标。作者偶尔暗示他有独特的想法，但很少有实际展示，只在500多章中提及主角独自想出阴阳鱼人工授精的创新点，其他时候主要依赖系统诊断和建议。
这部小说的优点是没有后宫（至少目前没有）。对于为什么不直接雇佣他人种植用于繁殖的种子植物，我不确定是主角或作者疏忽了，还是有合理的内世界解释。毕竟，主角曾提到系统不会奖励他培育种子，而他自己照顾灵植很耗费精力。随着剧情发展，他有了自己的山头和财富，有很多人愿意学习，即使不让别人处理高级灵植，他自己培育的基础变异植物也应该能应付，因为它们是最常见的，需求也较低。
总的来说，如果你想要轻松阅读，不需动脑筋，这部小说是个不错的选择，对心理影响不大。
I'm so frustrated. I just finished a novel only for it to never explain the transmigration aspect, which is the entire premise of the book...
**Characters:**
- **MC/FL**: Tang Luo
- **ML**: Chu Junyan
- **ogML**: Yu Chifeng
- **ogMC/FL**: Lu Si Ke
**Detailed Summary of Plot:**
The story revolves around the main character (MC), who was an orphan in her original world and transmigrates into a book, becoming a minor character, the daughter of a wealthy family and the ex-fiancée of the original male lead (ogML). A "system" informs her that the body she possesses has a terminal illness with a lifespan of two months. To survive, she must gain the trust of ogML, as her lifespan is tied to his perception of her. Higher trust points extend her life, while higher favorability points, which increase when she acts kindly towards ogML, shorten it.
To ensure her survival, MC decides to break off her engagement with ogML and find a new boyfriend, hoping to convince ogML that she has moved on. She meets the male lead (ML) and starts dating him. However, ogML interprets her actions as attempts to win his attention, causing her trust points to drop and her lifespan to shorten.
In the second half of the novel, the "system" becomes less prominent, and the focus shifts to MC and ML's relationship, along with the drama stirred up by ogML. The initial premise of extending her lifespan through the "system" is largely forgotten.
**Complaints:**
- **The "System"**: The inclusion of a "system" seems unnecessary and poorly integrated. By the end, it's barely mentioned, making its existence feel redundant.
- **Transmigration Explanation**: The reason for MC's transmigration is never clearly explained. ML supposedly forced her soul to transmigrate, but the method and the purpose are unclear. The novel hints that ML might have designed the "system," but this is never confirmed or explored.
- **ML's Background**: ML and MC first met in MC's original world when they were teenagers, both hospitalized. After his body died in her world, he woke up in his own world, having been in a coma for a year. The novel glosses over how he realized they lived in different dimensions, attributing it to his intelligence without providing details.
- **ML's Plan**: ML's resolve to gain financial power to meet MC again is mentioned, but there's no explanation of how he planned to use his wealth to bridge the dimensional gap. The novel provides no insight into his research or methods.
- **ogML's Fate**: ogML's role diminishes after he sees MC and ML together. His relationship with the original female lead (ogFL) is left unresolved, and their chemistry is nonexistent.
- **ogFL's Character**: ogFL is portrayed as weak and annoying, often crying and lacking depth. Her relationship with ogML feels contrived, given their lack of connection and ogML's treatment of MC.
- **Character Development**: The novel fails to develop secondary characters, focusing almost entirely on MC and ML.
**Ending and Additional Drama:**
- **ML's Proposal**: After proposing, the author introduces unnecessary drama with MC trying to run away from ML because his powerful businessman identity is revealed. Despite ML never harming her, MC fears he will kill her.
- **Marriage and Doubts**: After signing the marriage certificate, MC overhears ML's assistant revealing that ML has been in love with her for seven years. This leads to more drama as MC questions ML's true feelings and plans to run away again. They got married after only a month of dating.
- **Qiao Yu's Introduction**: A last-minute addition, Qiao Yu, an orphan and jewelry designer, is introduced as a potential love rival. ML denies any romantic involvement, explaining that he supported her financially because she reminded him of MC. This subplot feels forced and adds unnecessary tension.
- **Memory Recovery**: MC has a head injury from her past, which erased her memories of meeting ML in the hospital. During their reconciliation, MC conveniently recovers these memories in a dream sequence.
The ending is a poor attempt to tie up loose ends, creating more questions than answers. The sudden revelation of ML crossing worlds and the introduction of Qiao Yu feel out of place and lack proper foreshadowing.
**Controversial Content:**
- **MC's Actions**: The novel portrays MC as a rapist. For ML's birthday, she drugs his food with aphrodisiacs and arranges for ogML to see them having sex, without obtaining ML's verbal consent. The novel justifies this by suggesting ML was a willing participant and that MC did it for his benefit.
- **Gender Stereotypes**: The author repeatedly implies that women cannot commit sexual assault and that men can only be victims if they allow it. This is deeply problematic and offensive.
, while parts of the novel were enjoyable, the second half became increasingly frustrating due to poor character development, unnecessary drama, and controversial content. The MC, initially portrayed as strong and clever, devolves into an unlikable, uncommunicative, and unethical character. The ending leaves many questions unanswered and introduces new issues without resolution.
Despite my fondness for the storyline, I couldn't rate this highly due to its unsatisfactory conclusion. The plot abruptly terminated without resolving key issues adequately. Here's a summary of my concerns:
1. There was insufficient background information on FL's character; the transmigration aspect felt rushed, and the accidental intimacy between them was glossed over.
2. The revelation that ML is the father of their child was handled poorly. He didn't acknowledge his paternity, leading FL to believe she was impregnated by his aide or a stranger. The supernatural aspect of impregnation through an astral body seemed implausible and forced for shock value.
3. The male lead (ML) lacked depth and development throughout the story.
4. FL's sudden shift from a docile demeanor to assertiveness wasn't well-explained or transitioned smoothly. Additionally, her fear of ML's potential violence disappeared without explanation.
5. Crucially, FL's love for ML was never explicitly stated.
Overall, these aspects marred the reading experience for me.