NemesisRyzen
This is my review after more than a year of writing this book. I will start by saying that this is not my best work, but one that is very fun to write, and from the comments I receive, it is quite fun to read as well.This is not an action-packed story with very high tension and suspense, so don’t expect that. It is more than anything a Slice of life. This is a story about a man who turned into energy and can no longer die. As a result, he goes around the world, the galaxies, and eventually the multiverse to see new things and visit new places.You will see all types of power systems, all types of stories, not just Eastern Fantasy as I idiotically put it up as. There’s cultivation, magic, summoning, space adventure, and will be many more things.In addition, I wish to answer a few questions and clear some confusion/ hatred. Q. Why did you turn him into a Human? That beats the premise of the story being about a Non-human MC.A. I didn’t turn him into a human, he was always meant to be one. I never intended to write a non-human MC to begin with when the idea first popped into my head. Still, in a sense, he’s still not a human and never will be.******Q. Why is the MC dumb/ not intelligent?A. When I started, I didn’t even know how to write a mediocre MC, let alone one with a brain. So I decided to go with an easy choice that will let me do some exposition without making it an info dump. So, basically, it was because I wasn’t very good at writing in general.*****Q. Why are the first 100 or so chapters bad?A. When I started writing the book, I had 0 hope of continuing it. I was already writing another book I had started just a month ago, so I didn’t pay much attention to it. I gave this book maybe an hour at most to simply write a chapter and no other time to think of the plot. As a result, the first 100 chapters are some of the worst chapters I have ever written.I only started caring because it ended up being quite a bit popular amongst the readers.*****Q. Why does the MC not jump in a volcano and sleep for a million years?A. I get this question a lot, even though it is explained. He cannot just sleep forever. There is a high chance of losing energy instead of gaining it when he sleeps. Besides, he likes meeting new people and seeing the world.******Q. Why does the MC care about humans?A. Why not? He was a human too, and in some way, he still is one. If you are looking for a cold MC, or anti-hero MC, this is not it. Just because he’s an immortal, he isn’t immediately apathetic to everything around him.*****I hope you can read past the first 100 chapters, and maybe even enjoy them. If you cannot, that’s understandable as well.Thank you for reading the book either way.
It is a good book but what I found most annoying was the money system so if anyone else needs it it is:1W :10,00010W : 100,000100W : 1,000,0001000W : 10,000,000
This novel is pretty hilarious ? I’ve never seen this writing style before ? It’s a first person point of view, there’s quite a few grammatical errors, text abbreviations and internet acronyms but it just works ?This was certainly an entertaining read ?
the author did great, and although the plot is cliche, I still love reading novels where the protagonist starts from the beginning until he dominates the world :) is this gonna be another harem novel? XD
Yeah, time sure does fly. It was a couple million years ago, but feels just like yesterday that I saw the first multicellular organism coming out of the primordial ocean. I almost stepped on it. Luckily I avoided it and now we have life on Earth. I have to say, the Chinese sure goes back a long way, just like me. ?
honestly, in my opinion this novel is the best thing I've found on this god forsaken platform and the only thing I dislike about this novel is that I can't read it for free cuz I got no money right now ?
Ha...You know, after reading the last chapter, I had to take a break of at least ten minutes to reflect on the ending of this novel.I searched online, and finally, after a while, I found some comments on Webnovel that revealed the mystery behind the ending of this novel.The novel was censored by the Chinese government. It's censored, not finished. The novel isn't over but simply cut off.Now, this novel is a hundred times better than the manhwa version, but that doesn't mean it's great, or at least not entirely.There are really a lot of things wrong with this novel, and I won't bother listing them all.Let's start with the MC: reincarnated, after reaching almost the pinnacle in his past life. OP, always a step ahead of enemies, and loves to continuously say, 'pathetic,' 'if you had come earlier, then you might have had some chance of winning,' 'and if I refuse, what will you do?' He's very arrogant, probably because he was the strongest in his past life. [Rating: 6.5]Plot: enriched up to a certain point. From chapter 100 to chapter 1190, it's very repetitive, and when I say repetitive, I mean really, really repetitive. The fights always start the same way (offending someone triggering a chain of villains who come one after another), and always end the same way (only after everything has happened, the MC reveals an upgrade in his power, crushes everyone, and so on...).The level of patriotism shown in this novel is insane. I mean, I don't mind if an author wants to praise their nation in their novels. They have every right to do so, but there's a limit to everything. Here, the Chinese are unjustly oppressed by everyone and finally saved by the MC. This happens first with the USA, then in a superior world, then in the universe because of an ancient force, etc... I mean, really?Not even humans in general, but specifically the Chinese! [Rating: 5]World-building: well, honestly, there's not much to say about it. I mean, it took almost 800 chapters to leave Earth and go to superior worlds, and usually, this is considered the beginning of the real journey in all novels, especially Chinese ones.[Rating: 6.5]Harem: now, honestly, I want to ask who put this tag here. I mean, did they even read the novel?Harem? What Harem? There isn't even a proper relationship. I mean, are there many beautiful girls? Yes!Are they all interested in the MC? Yes!Have they managed to enter an intimate relationship with him? No!He only chose one girl, the girl of his dreams, his so-called better half. The woman for whom he had to wait five centuries in his past life, and another 10 years in this one. And you know what? After marrying her, they haven't even kissed, let alone gone to bed. Even his mother had a chance to kiss him (she was excited about something. Nothing serious).So, as I was saying, this novel has many problems, and the main issue is that it was dropped due to censorship.Personally, I'm not entirely happy with what I've read, especially after reading 1207 chapters, only to not be able to continue the plot. Especially when it seemed to become interesting and less repetitive. It's a novel I recommend reading at your own risk because it's not bad, but it's not extraordinary either.final rating: 6.3 /10p.s: novel chapter 1207 = manwha chapter 626
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I love this novel, one of my favourite
Quite an enjoyable read - i've had enough of the 53453th cultivation novel thats exactly the same with different names.
At least as far as i read it seems to be different though so i'd like the translation to get continued.
Improved and less racist version of im really a super star featuring more understandable comedy and entertainment. A worthy spiritual succesor that seem to do everything right
