I love the character design and all, but I can't seem to get into the story. I don't think I'll keep reading it, but who knows. Updates are not the most stable, and there are a bunch of grammar mistakes. With so many, it's hard for the story to flow, for me at least. I have a couple of complaints.1. Ranking system is too complicated in terms of name.2. Organs. I think you should put the name of the actual organ, because I have no idea what is what3. You deviate from the plotline too much. I get that it may be necessary for the story, but it really doesn't let the story continue. It just gets interrupted and it gets hard to get into it. Maybe put a bit of the plot and then a shorter version of the side character story. Once in a while is okay, but you do it too many times.4. Grammar is iffy.5. Goes really fast.
eigthy or something chapter in, my problem is the mc, hes no cultivation killer, but he's soft, naive, and is painful to read. this is a really interesting premise though.
We need more !! we need mass chapter !! 7/week not enough !! spirit stone? power stone? if this novel not make me bored.. i will give it all to you~ now i waiting.....for...more.... chapter.....
this book started my reading adventute... even though I came and went and am only at 1100. I feel a bit emotional to see the completed status of the novel.
cool story for me and you you can take care either way you can get married or something else
Good work author, keep it up
Daily updates commence on the 1st guys:) And things are heating up......
I hot hooked on the first chapter. Nice job
nice plot, keep it up
DO NOT PURCHASE BOOK 2. It’s been incomplete for over a year. Just end at book 1 which is really good!
I can’t wait for part two!!!!
This story is really intriguing, Jeremy is such a gentleman This is how men should fight for their family members. I love them I love this book.