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Ok, so this book should continue!! so far it's amazing, I'm a fan of zombies and apocalypse books, this is just great.......................
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Hi there, Author-Nim.After reading the first volume of this book, I give this book a 3,8 review. Here I explain why.1) Writing QualityThis book has a lot of typos and grammatical errors just as the author has explained. I can understand that because my native language is not English. However, the number of words for each chapter is inconsistent. I found out some chapters were short, and some were a bit long.2) Story DevelopmentThe pace of the story is kinda slow at some points and made me feel bored. However, the story itself is pretty good even though some parts kinda confusing without any explanation.3) Character DesignThe character description is pretty decent I guess? But I think you forgot to explain what Alex looks like.4) Updating StabilityIt's good to know if you keep updating every day, but the time is kinda random. I can understand that after I read your first Auxiliary chapter.5) World BackgroundKinda vague in my mind since you said that there are three worlds in this book, but I started to understand it the more I read.I hope you do better next time.- Eien Warui.
This story is really good, there are a lot of new plots every chapter and overall the design is really nice! I think this is the second best story I've ever read, behind I only level up, I suggest reading this!
Absolutely loved this book from start to finish. I live in the same area this book is based so it was fascinating and exciting to hear places referred to that I could actually picture in my mind's eye. The character development was cleaver and enjoyable. A genuine page turner!!! Looking forward to the next piece of work from the author.
It was already in the system and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and
IT BEEN FOREVER SENSE U PUT ANY CHAPTERS OUT!! R U GOING TO COME BACK OR NOT?? IF NOT CAN U JUST TAKE UR BOOK DONE PLEASE BECAUSE I REALLY DONT WANT MY HOPES TO BE SO HIGH ALL THE TIME WAITING FOR U!! I LOVE THIS BOOK AND WANT TO SEE IT CONTINUE BUT OBVIOUSLY SOMETHING IS GOING ON AND IF UR NOT GOING TO KEEP IT GOING THEN JUST GET RID OF IT PLEASE!! DONT MIND THE CAPS MY PHONE IS BROKE BUT I REALLY LOVE THIS BOOK AND WANT IT TO KEEP GOING!!!
The thought and imagination put into this book is absolutely splendid! The characterS and the beasts were described meticulously. My favorite part was when Lucas and the humanoid mantis faced of each other. Looking forward to reading more chapters! :)
Haven't read the story, so I'm gonna give it 5 stars, but I've never read a book on here with a good Samaritan MC, so I have zero clue what the author is talking about in his synopsis.
so far it's perfect, the beginning is very interesting..................................................................................................................
This story has a similar premise to how we've seen before of VRMMOs and the journey of a hero through it. There's enough of a mystery there to keep you reading while also making the world of the VRMMO interesting enough that you want to learn more. The characters have plenty of room to grow, which is good for a story. Can't wait to see more as it comes out.