First I'm now impressed with the good English and sentence phrasing of this novel, it's like a poem. Explaining the Romantic relationship between MC and her bae through poetic words is another level. Other than that the world setting is futuristic you can empathise with MC, why he is so much involved with emotions or memories.
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
This is one of the stories I have hi hopes for. I really hope it's picked up (though sadly webnovel record for picking stories is well.....)
It's extremely hard to find a good sports book on webnovel. Yet this is one of the best I've ever read so far.
From chapter 171 onwards it's straight up unreadable, the translation quality took a deep plunge into the abyss, it's no different from mtl now.
when will i het my powers. .
The clichè banished young master again? Come on! We need new setting!!!!!! It would have been good if he lived as a young master and bully others on daily basis instead
are the disciple of the werewolf died in the other dimension or imprisoned?without to mention that necro is not mad.The sons of the golden are dead or they are take revenge who knows.
absolutely love everything, like the characters interaction between and etch
One of the best original novels on this site... even though there are thing that I like and diskile in this novel, overall, is a good read to me. (SPOILER ALERT)
What I like:
- very good pacing
- very good grammar
- smart and calculative mc
- ruthless mc
- hardworking mc
- solus (really usefull companion/ai/equipment)
- nana (his 'magic mentor' i really enjoy the interations with the old perky magician lol)
- character grow (we can see how the characters grow along with the progress of the novel, even though its more mc focused, but i dont have any problems with that)
What I dislike:
- the nobles/young masters trope
- his older brother, that seems going to be an annoying factor through the novel, or at least will come back and bite him in the a*s...
- the 'hidding true strength and look like a scrub' trope... ( well i can understand the hiddind strength part since its logical when you are at the bottom, but so far we have a somewhat ugly mc, i mean every one in his family is somewhat decent and only him and his father seem to be the ugly ones...)(note: he seems to get better looking with each increase of his magic core, but it seems that at best he will be average, which i will be ok with, as long as he doesn't remain ugly lol)
Even though the beginning of the novel may seem slow, or somewhat confusing, it works as an introduction to the mc personality, and help us understand him better, so I suggest that u should read at least 10 chaps before diciding if u like it or not, thats what I always do.
Hello again! Why are new chapters come on so rare now?No time or other reason?
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This is really well written the more I read the more I want, and I really can't wait to see how it progresses in the future. I wouldn't mind buying it that's how much I like it.