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Author you are amazing!!! I love this story a lot??
Bro what’s up about the update please come and drop a notification
story is interesting but too slow uptates
Personally, I think this book is awesome.
U didn't see the forced romance part brother considering his dimensional descent novel I am sure we gotta go through some romance drama part for 50-100 chps.
Is the rewrite being updated here or as a new story on site?
it honestly gets repetitive. He powers up, kills the super powerful bad guy, and then 3 chapters later gets into a fight with some thug and gets his *ss kicked for 90% of the fight, only to pull out some move that he had the whole time and one shots him. I get that hes like an emotionless/childlike innocence type character, but thats no excuse for having absolutely ZERO character development for 400 chapters. Story and lore wise, i love it. If the characters weren't so one dimensional, this would honestly be my favorite book
this novel suffers from an author whos just venting his frustrations lol it REALLY feels like its just thoughts an edgy kid has as a way to get back at someone. the most insane shampoo bottle arguing going on while writing it like it is just so odd that he has this much of a fascination with slashing people with hatchets. i think the concept is really good and it shows when the first 5 chapters (bar the first cause it has so many exposition lmao) are the best chapters for a long while cause the only thing they have is the concept before any of the random sh*t like the trauma harem etc lol. if this novel had a better author i think the concept couldve excelled but here we are. one last note is that PARTHIB made a list of bad traits the mc has and one of them was not op, which is so blatantly not true he quite literally gets his power *ss pulled out of nowhere and its always just enough to win while near death etc etc u get the formula
Does this have romance...
Yes, I am not racist.
"Huge melons" does add a lot of Tension~~~
