This Novel sat in my Library for quite a while because of the negative comments ... a month ago I thought about giving it a shot ... it's true the writing quality is bad but it has improved a bit with time. Character development took OKish but it still requires quite a brushing ..... But the most disappointing thing is the use of Heavy Plot Armours .. repeatedly.. Certain bets and terms /deals were used according to the wordings " you have to follow every command of mine / I will own everything you have if I win " and people readily agrees ( People are not that stupid and these are not ordinary people who we are talking about but powerhouses! ) without thinking the pros-cons of such a deal . Take example of Yanagi , a senior at his institute and most the powerful youth , readily agreed to the term " you will obey every command ... " if one could interpret , it is similar to a slave contract ! , ( My words ) , it should be properly mentioned what " everything" means in this novel - everything could include ones money , property , Mana Fruits , and Weapons but it can also include ones time , body , soul , his wife / husband and family... a clear cut defination is Very much required .. And don't talk about the Plot Armours... if one is giving it a try.... they will surely understand what I mean ...
While the chapters are relased frequently , this story is not my Cup of tea ...
Dropping it ..
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Man as far as webnovels about realms that aren’t necessarily a secret but like not exactly known about either, it’s like more of a secret. Yeah, as far as webnovels abt secret realms go, this one is a good cool solid read. Very cool, ty.
B O R I N GA boring power up story that wastes it's original premise. I was expecting unique strategies or usage of the top up system, but nope it shows up whenever the author feels like boosting the MC. Translation is spotty and reads like an engineering report: "Went there, did that, got rewards"MC has no personality or development and is pretty much an emotionless robot. side characters are generic cardboard cutouts of "this is villain
Dropped cause nothing makes realy sense erverything is over exaggerated or other nonsensical stuff is happening
This story was literally an alternative of magic recovery. Billion talent awaken? Well I forgot but this one base on martial talent the other on magic talent. They are both good stories but there were many grammatical error. I like it but I can't read it. I always confuse on who is who.
I liked it more than the usual since the revenge actually happened and the misunderstandings were actually eventually resolved, but it was quite lackluster. In addition, he can't seem to lose feelings for his ex-wife (who cheated on him and is obviously a gold digger), and according to what I've read in some other reviews, they even get back together. I very, very rarely write reviews, but this novel is terrible.
A review for the free chapters:
A light read of your typical MMORPG player regressor novel. The MC is moving too fast, might be due to impatience of wanting to clean up regrets..
For a web novel pace, the story is moving too fast that might cause the story to lose steam around 300 chapters in if the pace is kept.
Writing quality is what you would expect from a non native English speaker with low novel writing experience. Much to be desired but much better compared to MTL.
Characters so far with 40 chapters are still founded on clichès with the possibility of growth..
Verdict: A better read than most if you've already read the better alternatives.
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—-—— Masterpieeceeeeee
So, my one of the favourite Webnovel is finished. I really like this journey. I hope you will make a side stories as fan request to you. I reall love this novel.