The whole company laughed.
Everything that touch the collapse return to nothingness. Only a few could survive this great end. This includes the 200 God Emperor and 10 Dao God. A Dao God has a great chance to survive while the 200 God Emperor, some of them will survive if they are lucky. After the universe end, a new one will born.
Akira stopped reading because he felt tired but the diary still bothers him. It was not possible for his mom to own it, so who does? his aunt, maybe? but as long as he remembers he does not have an aunt.
A melhor história de Construção de Reino que eu já li
The story starts out fairly interesting with a uniquely mature protagonist, finding his place in a new world and it's pretty interesting for a couple of chapters but after a certain event where the protagonist kills someone he shouldn't have and needs to go on the run, the story gradually becomes stale, the chapters become more long winded and I can't really get into anything because the story and characters seem to have become nearly completely aimless, I even skimmed like half of the chapters I've read and I never felt like I missed out a single thing. The protagonist has had completely no development since early on, and while the side characters do develop, they're very basic characters through and through, nothing special to see there. Everything always somehow just works out for the protagonist and there are plot holes as ridiculous as one chapter an arm of the protagonist get broken and the next it's like the author completely forgot...The worst thing about the translation is that htere are often pov changes that happen without any indication, we're literally talking about 1 paragraph being from mc's perspective and the next from another's, there's no transition at all most of the time. It's quite ridiculous.
I liked how the protagonist didn't jump to rescue anyone, and isn't an a-grade asshole. Nor did he take advantage of his power when the girl rejected him. He didn't kill the cultivator, and even gave him his house for information, also warning. He didnt go on disrespecting and slaughtering any one, so his moral character and views seem to be idealistic but not overly so. The writing though could use some editing. Looking forward to other chapters. Do get a beta reader and an edited please.
I couldn't believe this. My main character wrote a bad review for his story. He only gave 5 star for Character Development. This Rabbink needs to shamelessly write the standard 5 stars review to balance the score. I promise never dropped this novel.
La historia es muy buena, hasta ahora el desarrollo va muy interesante e innovador, espero que te apresures y escribas mas esta muy bueno... dame mas xd
for me its probably at best 3 out of 5, idk about the story, as I kind of dropped it really quickly by like chapter 10 or something, but from what I have read so far is just some guy nitpicking Japanese society and making japan out as 'dangerous' with some sword stuff inside as well, honestly not that great, the japan that is portrayed is really anime like and not really like normal japan as you don't see yakuza members all over japan robbing and threatening civilians or Japanese police not doing anything, not only that its some Chinese dude that's nitpicking all of these things like miso soup having msg and like im super confused being like 'you Chinese right, we drink loads of stuff with msg, idk what you talking about' or something like rice 3 times a day, like my guy you don't eat rice three times a day, that's like getting an 99% in math and not getting 110% in math
I found this by luck..why the **** do all the authors that write the good FF's hide this ****......... honestly I found this by luck....put it in FF.........also whats up with the new chp?..it confusing..................................in case anyone misunderstands the one star is cause the author didnt put it in FF...
Deteriorated from ch 247 onwards.Ruined the romance aspect of the novel.Too much match details, one match can take 10 chapters. It reads more like a football journal (play-by-play) analysis.
such an amazing starting eagerly waiting for the new updates so that I can enjoy reading it update soon author waiting for the updates❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️