the story is good so far and I love the little bits of comedy that pop up throughout so so far if say it's a great read for a cultivation novel
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All the possible positives of this story are completely ruined by the blatant recapping of previous chapters. At times as much as half the next chapter is simply cut from the previous chapter. I am over the 140 chapter mark and this trend is still continuing if I had not done a mass unlock at the beginning I would have long given up on this book as I am basically paying twice for half as much content. Such a disappointment.
overall the story is very well rounded, but I feel that a couple changes could make all the difference. What I feel are those changes are 1. the fight scenes should be longer ( not more descriptive, as in more back and forth) and 2. you should add pov's to other characters ( your choice on how long)
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Mediocre is the best way to describe everything, not bad but not good either.-Demons don't feel demonic in any way beyond appearance.-MC is just kindoff doing stuff without motivation or any compelling traits.-General origin plot/world is the same as many of other novels in this site but doesn't actually make as much sense in context as humanity isn't in desperate need.-Supporting characters are forgettable.
All I can say is...ᥬThe author of this story didn't hide MC's stupidity for the whole 40 chaps or more. It shows he's such an honest person.☯︎
I swear if this author stops updating I will find his location and put him in my unfinished basement.. to forever write chapters just for me..
Honestly this is an amazing story that combines the cautiousness of a decent cultivator MC while not being too overbearing outwardly. I like the focus on physical similar to way of the devil but for an orginial minus the odd spacing and basic grammer errors its worth 5, 4 is only because its not professional quality and can be a bit of a info dump at times.
This novel takes inspiration from tensura, not much and it is it's own interesting world, it has only two times when it takes something from tensura, that's the skill ranking (maybe) and the fact he starts with a skill that takes skills and other things, but that's all. It's so good, if you like tensura read this NOW, it's funny the story is good. I hope the author continues to write this.
It is a good novel but the romance ruined the story for me??u200d♀️
It could have been good but it's written like a middle school fan fiction by an author who slept through English classes. Either that or it's been through google translate. It doesn't seem to be translation though it's pretty strange. I can only assume the author is a teenager or child who understands how to spell but not how sentence struture works.