SS class book! that's all I can say ?The writing was captivating, The characters were believable and I cared about them, The plot had so many twists and turns I couldn't put the book down.
The most impressive part of the novel is that I didn't have to spend even a second yawning or whatsoever as a result of boredom or over familiarity ??The chapter are well aligned in the order the should be inI'm not done reading but I know I wouldn't regret this ?????More chapters please ?... So wouldn't have to wait a second for you to upload the rest Keep it up❤❤❤
I don’t know if it’s lost in translation or the author is racist, but I’m pretty sure the author is racist extremely racist. How do you get into American basketball and be racist to African-Americans like he calls African-Americans sewer he considers a sewer creatures.
I do quite like the style you've got going here. It's quite descriptive and gives your reader a very vivid imagery of what is going on and gives their imagination enough food to imagine some small details themselves. Which is a good thing. Although, if I may add a small point of critique: I notice you have rather long paragraphs. In essence, there is nothing wrong with that, but quite a lot of people like shorter paragraphs, with dialogue laced through them to keep the story flowing. Rather than long paragraphs. I will admit you have shorter paragraphs near chapter 5, so I think you are on the right track! Keep up the good work!
Writing a "review" for the purpose of obtaining more free awesome bricks. But seriously folks, do try reading this novel if not to only broaden your reading horizons.
Things were going great till author went down the Futanari road ... that's not my cup of tea ... I am dropping this as of now on chapter 175
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I cannot fully express how excited I am about this book. Just 6 chapters in and I am fully hooked and desperately need more. First of, the writing quality is great: it's clear, no grammar mistakes, and has a good style and use of language. The same applies to every other criterion. But what really stands out to me about this book is the character design. First, I love that it is a bl novel. There are truly not enough of them, and this one is shaping up to be one that can compete with the best bl or straight romance novels out there. Of course, the magical/fantasy and action aspects of it seem as if they will be just as interesting. My favorite part is the mc, he actually will possess ice powers instead of the stereotypical fire/lightning combo, and has a cold and aloof personality but clearly still cares about his close ones, making him op and super satisfying to read about. I can't recommend this enough!
I love this book I love watching action movies but there aren't much action books , but this one Is an exception , I love it , it's really entertaining , I can't wait for more updates ?
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