Seems good so far, We could use more detail on what the world and characters feels/looks like as it breaths. Some writing mistakes are prevalent, but nothing major.
Author this novel is a real diamond the story is getting more and more interesting with every chapter and twist.please don't ever drop this novel I will always support you.Thanks for the novel author ? and keep up the good ? work.
Clark Kent as ...Superman ? yes
But Gaster Kingdom is his home which resulted into him having the most willpower to protect this place.
"Nice first move but its my turn now, cubone sandstorm" praise Derek
His mind now became oppressed by the recollection of every misfortune of his past life. The mortification he had suffered at the ambassador's, and his subsequent troubles, were revived in his memory. He became utterly inactive. Destitute of energy, he was cut off from every pursuit and occupation which compose the business of common life; and he became a victim to his own susceptibility, and to his restless passion for the most amiable and beloved of women, whose peace he destroyed. In this unvarying monotony of existence his days were consumed; and his powers became exhausted without aim or design, until they brought him to a sorrowful end.
I want to see result before they finish the preliminary preparation on the wells Musa, take this seriously.
It's a cool place and they say it gets colder
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
Only shooting stars break the mold
Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming
Only shooting stars