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please continue the story, i have been looking everywhere for an ottoman alternate history and yours are one of the best Ive read, please continue
I can tell this is going to be a great read. I have read just the synopsis and can’t wait to read more about Roxy and Sabastian. Please, author don’t keep me waiting for long.
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
Good story but the reason why I gave it a lower score is because the author missed so much good potential. You start to get into the background of this abandoned child to the dragon queen and understand all the mistreatment he underwent because of his mother hating him for being half dragon, and when it comes to this climatic build up to see how the mc will deal with it…… he’s just like oh yeah I forgive you super anticlimactic really could of drawn that out and got really good character growth and development rather than just yeah you abandoned me it’s ok give me power blah blah blah man this could of been a great story that pulled you in mushed shot bro?
this book made me to enjoy web novel and am happy u an going to rate web novel 5.o for this
reviewing for the event fp keep up the good work
interestinggood book but few chapters...and yeah the author needs some support for sure...ive read authors thoughts and...bro definitely needs some motivation or otherwise he'll die ??
This is just flat excellent. Hilarious system and it's pretty original too. I haven't seen one like that before and it adds so much. Keep it going! Super happy with it so far!
amazing boo with a loveable family and interesting development
hmm. it's quite fast and a lot of things are rushed. like the concept of the novel but is it not being justice.
The start was good, and I was enjoying how it was progressing, but all of a sudden, wam bam, now I'm an S rank man with little to no blacksmithing going on. It becomes more of a fighting book rather than a blacksmithing one. I was looking forward to reading about a blacksmith going from F to S gradually, but he goes from F to S in like 20 chapters.The writing could also use some work, as there are occasional gender switches, incorrect math, and somewhat poor Grammer. The worst part, though, is switching from modern language to something from Medieval times, using thee, thou, etc. for no reason.Overall, I'd say it's a 3. If the author had stuck to the blacksmithing portion and not made him OP so fast that it gave me whiplash, then I would've kept reading it.