Man that's a great story for a Beginner, Keep on writing and don't forget to improve you skills on the same time. And last don't abandon the story. All the best
To me this novel isn't even a sequel to the previous one, you can tell that is written by a different author. It should be treated as a fanmade rather than an original sequel.
I stoped at chapter 8, i could have at chapter 6 because this novel IS RUBBISH..,.I WON'T WASTE MORE OF MY TIME, farewell
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The start is definitely a bit slow, but it’s still worth it! The only issue I have is the sometimes, the plot is a bit too convoluted and confusing to understand, so I’m left not knowing what is happening.
Either way, an amazing read! Keep up the good work!
grammar: great, little errors or none at all really, cant notice when readingstory: interesting, kind of to the pointaction: amazing characters: entertaining, really like the boxing champ
Great story eagerly waiting for the story to be completed. love the characters and their roles can't wait for the end. Thumbs up to the writer
Yes another garbage im waiting for 1m time, keep it coming.
In the era of system and VR (In WN), It’s rare to stumble upon books that have something fresh to offer with a new plot. Secret Society is a novel that focuses on crime, thriller and mystery with comedy and romance as side dishes. *Cough* I have read it while it was still in beta form but reading it in WN gives a different emotion.So, here is a thorough review from what I have read and what you can expect. Writing Quality: It won't be a lie if I say, I am jelly jelly of the author for having a strong and mesmerizing writing style. In every chapter of Secret society (SecSy), you can see the dedication and effort put into them. A solid 5/5.Stability of updates: 1 chapter a day at the very least. I mean as long as the author doesn’t slack off, We can expect a nice update rate, muhahahaha.Story Development: Ayo, do you even need to ask? Up to where I have read, and of course from what I know, the story is going to get only better. Character Design: Both of the MCs, Xavier and Eulene(Yue Lin) are well-designed characters. For me, Yue Lin is relatable character at some point, *cough*, but of course, she is so much better. You will grow to love every character, even if they appear for a bit.World Background: This is a steampunk novel, aka, Victorian Setting. So, the dressing, food, lifestyle, education, rules and such shows resemblance to that period. For me, it was first time trying out a novel of this genre, and I must say, I am SUPER GLAD that I decided to read it.Cover: Welp, I have no qualms about it. I love it! Conclusion: Thank you for reading my rant without getting bored. So, if you decided to read till here, why don't you give this a read? Who knows what awaits you. *wink wink*
Another novel I finished by Sixth-sama! He always write such great stories so you better add them all! So go on now read it, you will not regret it one bit! Umu!
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